Iruka's WIP Emporium. Comic P2 roughs.
So I figure I'd make a thread since I'm going to try and get some stuff done in the next few weeks.
Working on this now:
Black and white:
Other random stuff.:
I know shes lopsided in the middle.
I'm working on another 3D printing project, I'll be posting that soon.
Damnit, I thought I actually had a useful crit for once and then I find it's already taken. Oh well, ^ seconded.
Other than that, I really like these.
I'm having a problem with the way the lower beak of the vomiting thing is aligned. It looks like it wouldn't connect with the far side of the head, as though it doesn't match the rotation of the head/top beak at all. It's on a flat plane parallel with the viewer, when it should be receding.
Man I wish I had photoshop at work!
edit: good eye robots, I'll try and fix it.
There, that's my helpful crit.
Mustang: I'm sure once I get off of school I will be coloring some more sketches, So probably. Coloring is relaxing, Drawing and animating burn me out. I would like to work on more Tees as well.
Those birds are freaky as hell, but I think that beetleborg thing is possibly the greatest thing ever.
was starting to get a little jittery
That's really the best thing.
Next to me, of course. It is second-best because I am best.
One is that your eye kind of gets stuck at the bottom. Perhaps because of the half circular form near the reddish bird on the right, but I flow from the top left following the bird spirits, down to the actual birds, and stop there, and then I'm just stuck. Simply breaking up that circle with a feather or something would help a lot, I think.
Also, there is a problem with the brightness of the upper spirit bird. The two light spots are SO light that they are the overpowering force in the image. And, more specifically, they very much make that bird "more important" than the other and also lean the weight of the piece in that direction. One way to fix that would maybe be to light up the red and green spirit bird's eye, or even to brighten the feathers on the top of it's wing. Just something to balance it out.
Heres some very loose concept sketches, which arent things I normally scan but we have a huge flatbed in the animation department now, so I figured why not. Its usually a pain to stitch together my 11X14 book for doodles.
I'd love to see an anamatic or something from you, you are an animation major right?
Do you have any facial animations? I'd love to see what you can do with changing expressions.
Unless you are just labeling yourself, in which case, carry on.
Man my compliments are also scathing insults!
Then you include on a forum
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I fucking added two of the same goddamn hand to the print file on accident. Its balls and I don't know if I have time to print another one before Friday.
PS.-It's really fucking cool by the way.
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Iruka is taking food out of the mouthes of hungry claymakers everywhere
Heres the model:
I know some sculpture majors, I'm pretty sure they'll always have old ladies to sell pretty bowls too. I don't feel bad. Though, I wonder if I could print bowls.
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I don't know where you could find one that you could access, but its a very cool process.
The colors are way more obnoxious in person, its like, hot pink, lime green, lemon yellow and Alizarin crimson.
Derived from these, which I've posted before:
And I love the obnoxious colors
also the print character is great
this thread is ambrosia for the eyes
Also these are rad. I like the bird spirits one ( I took them to not be baby birds, but rather just dead birds and these were their spirits...). I think the jaw is still wrong on the red one. I see what you did to fix it, but I don't think it was quite enough. Rather than trying to further align the top part, I would take the... back bit of the lower beak (the part furthest into the background) and make it closer to the front part horizontally (does that make sense?). I think that will make it look like it lines up better with the head.