Tell me what you think! I don't know if people remember my old threads (I couldn't find them with searching, so I assume they're lost) but I'm starting to feel a bit of progress in my work after a long time on an awkward plateau.
Just a few pages from things I've done in chronological order, then my newest:
Most recent, still playing with a new typeface for the banners though so it's a bit of a WIP still:
I can't think of anything really to crit except the readability of the font, but again these may not be the actual size.
As for your comic, I think the text would be a little more readable if it were a bit higher res, but it looks quite interesting.
Beardsley was my main influence in my style for this, in fact:
inspired the costume design for the Crow and shot in page two. My other main heroes/inspirations are Windsor McCay:
And Charles Vess:
Based on a true story. A few issues- not sure about the type, although I really want to keep it at the same time because of the Sailor-Jerry ish style of it.
And there's a few hands that look freaky, I know.
I likes it though, I just can't reads it.