Crawling out from the lurking woodwork (NSFW) (+new stuff added in last post)

Kim kong

And since I have no woodwork to be crawling out from(and I don't want to hijack the doodle-thread), I'll just post my artyfartsy stuff here for critique.

Please, be gentle.

For starters, I once drew a man running,



Then I thought I should change the expression on his face,



and of course I did some other stuff,



although never used much colour...



but I'm trying to correct that...with drawings of nude girls. Like these,





I hope these show up as drawings and not a bunch of internettomagicalspellwordsthings...otherwise I have a lot of editing to do.

I probably will scan some live-studies later this week.

Edit: It seems 'later this week' has arrived early

Women and men nude and drawn from life reference

The first batch is done 15-25 minutes,





Second or last(or like...whatever) batch is done 2-8 minutes,





Hope they show up.

beavotron

i get red xes for all of them

F87

The black and white are my favorites, the color ones would benefit from reference and smother lines. I think your strongest work is when you imply more, rather than show it. Although, it seems this could become a crutch for you, I may just need to see more of your art.

Tam

That one with the huskies(?) is top notch. Keep doing the anatomy studies.

Endless_Serpents

Right at the top with those thick shadows? Top fucking knotch.
I'm really glad to see you are branching out into different styles, if I was ever the type to give advise I'd say try your hand at everything, you'll need it if you make a career out of this. But sure, keep up the anatomy studies and then later you can take a crack at the pink haired girl again.
I look foreward to you updating this thread. Five star would read again.

Food

Those are some excellent 15 minute figure drawings.

NightDragon

I'd suggest working on your anatomy a lot more. It's good that you've done figure studies, but try to focus more on getting the proportions and muscle masses down properly instead of shading everything.

Kim kong

Thanks everyone for their critiques, but could somebody specifically point out where I go wrong with my anatomy?
I just want to know which parts I seem to keep doing wrong, 'cause I don't seem to be able to pick them out myself.

But in the meantime...more work from me...yippie

The Black Hunter

Your attempts at colour are definately the weakest, and the orange head has some screwed up anatomy, otherwise this all looks great

Kim kong

Other stuff done by me...

This time commissioned, A logo/mascot design for a fast food place in town.

It's supposed to be a devil,because that's apparently going to be the name of the place.

enjoy and critique away...



The colours aren't as intense once printed, and are more than likely temporary place holders.

Kim kong

adding new stuff...nothing too impressive

Flay

I really like your black and white pieces, but your colour works aren't so good. I think the jagged strokes you've got going (on the colour ones) let them down, and your colours are also generally quite flat.

But those black and white ones... nifty. :^:

Kim kong

Arden Canelo

Hey I just posted my stuff on here for the first time ( in a while ) too! We can be first time post buddies!
As for your art I can agree with the black and whites more than the color ones.
You should go to our Questions and Tutorials thread and read some.
Also Posemaniacs.com is a good tool to use for learning anatomy. Draw more from life though, that's what everyone will say to you sooner or later.