Hello, I came up with a concept for a webcomic that may or may not be made, and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to offer constructive criticism on the concept, sorry that the art isn't better, but I'm not the best, and I did these fairly quikly.
This is the second concept strip I drew, I would have put the first one up, but it was too long.Page 1
and Page 2Here's
one not related to the story in the last one.Here's
some concept art
And here are two that are almost completely unrelated to the last two. here's the first one First one
and the second one