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New Comic 6/12/09 Automata

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  • Metzger MeisterMetzger Meister It Gets Worse before it gets any better.Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Is... is that Marshmallow in panel 7?

    holy shit.

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  • World as MythWorld as Myth a breezy way to annoy serious people Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    robot noir is a genre that needs more exploration

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  • Gear GirlGear Girl More class than a state university Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I wish they would just do runs of all these ideas.

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  • Zetetic ElenchZetetic Elench Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I don't mean this as a slight on Lookouts, but the writing in this feels superior. Way superior. It is fucking great.

    And a gorgeous new artstyle, to boot?

    I'm not seeing Jim Darkmagic or Lookouts winning me over at this point.

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  • Me Too!Me Too! __BANNED USERS regular
    edited June 2009
    I like this more than Lookouts!

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  • DruhimDruhim Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    Gear Girl wrote: »
    I wish they would just do runs of all these ideas.
    well I wish you didn't drive me to alcoholism, but that doesn't change anything does it?

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  • toriantorian Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Is... is that Marshmallow in panel 7?

    Actually it looks like a walking iPod to me.

    torian on
  • GameGrrlGameGrrl Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    It kinda reminds of:

    http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=1434574702064909013

    but obviously Tycho's backstory wouldn't have gigantic plot holes

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  • Viscount IslandsViscount Islands [INSERT SoKo HERE] ...it was the summer of my lifeRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I really think these two need to take a few months break from Penny Arcade comics, because they can really make some splendid stuff.

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  • el_vicioel_vicio Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Man, I'm so in love with that Carl character already

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  • <3<3 Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    should i listen to the podcast?

    <3 on
  • KovakKovak did a lot of drugs married cher?Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    you guys have really strong opinions

    on the internet

    Kovak on
  • toriantorian Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Gear Girl wrote: »
    I wish they would just do runs of all these ideas.

    I agree. I don't understand why they don't show one next week, one for PAX, and the other later in the year (do they go to Blizzcon or something else?). That way we can have all three and live in a place of happiness forever with robots and fantasy boy scouts and snarky wizards and, and cake.

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  • UrQuanLord88UrQuanLord88 Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    This reminds me of the astroboy remake, Pluto:
    http://www.onemanga.com/Pluto/

    but then again, it is probably familiar ground for all "iz robots human?!" stories

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  • Cilla BlackCilla Black Priscilla!!! Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Faricazy wrote: »
    dystopian societies with robot detectives will get my vote every time
    not necessarily dystopian

    just people being dicks to things they don't see as like them. pretty normal, actually.

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  • Penguin IncarnatePenguin Incarnate King of Kafiristan Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    . . . And then there's Ferro City, which I just now realized is a play on words.

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  • Der Waffle MousDer Waffle Mous Blame this on the misfortune of your birth. New Yark, New Yark.Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    This makes me want to run an Eberron game.

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  • Dropping LoadsDropping Loads Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    No slight to this at all, and as others have mentioned the writing is solid, but what's new? It's hard to tell a story like this and do something different, it always turns out as political commentary.

    The Lookouts has that oh-so-fresh feeling. It's a solid new concept and I bet it ends up as a stand-alone IP.

    Which would make a better Saturday morning cartoon?

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    No slight to this at all, and as others have mentioned the writing is solid, but what's new? It's hard to tell a story like this and do something different, it always turns out as political commentary.

    The Lookouts has that oh-so-fresh feeling. It's a solid new concept and I bet it ends up as a stand-alone IP.

    Which would make a better Saturday morning cartoon?

    I think the question is really which would make a better comic.

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  • Fatty McBeardoFatty McBeardo Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    i don't want to have to choose between these D:

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  • darleysamdarleysam On my way to UKRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    It's gonna be Jim Darkmagic or the cutesy bunch, but damnit, I want more of this.

    I need more of this.

    darleysam on
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  • autono-wally, erotibot300autono-wally, erotibot300 love machine Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    oh wonderful, definitely wonderful <3

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  • GameGrrlGameGrrl Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    This reminds me of the astroboy remake, Pluto:


    but then again, it is probably familiar ground for all "iz robots human?!" stories


    I don't think you can link that here.

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  • Dropping LoadsDropping Loads Registered User regular
    edited June 2009

    I think the question is really which would make a better comic.

    Hint: It's the same answer for both :)

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  • Zetetic ElenchZetetic Elench Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    No slight to this at all, and as others have mentioned the writing is solid, but what's new? It's hard to tell a story like this and do something different, it always turns out as political commentary.

    The Lookouts has that oh-so-fresh feeling. It's a solid new concept and I bet it ends up as a stand-alone IP.

    Which would make a better Saturday morning cartoon?

    I guess what really did it for me is - the designs are gorgeous, and it's fresh stylistically, but most importantly Carl really stands out as a really great character, just from those few panels.

    I didn't get that feeling from anyone in Lookouts, much as I liked it.

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  • WeaverWeaver Breakfast Witch Hashus BrowniusRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    oh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit

    Weaver on
  • ButlerButler 89 episodes or bust Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    We're on to a different comic now but I'm posting this anyway:

    The Ballad of the Lookouts

    In the Eyrewood depths we make our home
    And through its thickets and glades we roam
    Though menaces lurk in the shadows and gloam
    We shall ever beat our path upon its springing loam

    Fear we not threat of tooth nor claw
    From bird and beast, reverence we draw
    From the tips of the leaves to the floor of the shaw
    Be our woodcraft and our presence the prevailing law

    Strong the will of a Lookout boy
    Knife to hand and an ear for danger
    Watch the treetops, taste the wind
    And through the Eyrewood safely go!

    Now a basilisk is a fearsome foe
    With a serpent’s tail and a cockerel’s toe
    And a tiny crown on its comb just so
    And its black eye ever burning with a fatal glow

    But a Lookout fears not a beast so vile
    And he’ll strike it down from an eighth of a mile
    With an arrow dipped in the weasel’s bile
    For the shot that hits unerring is his typical style

    Strong the will of a Lookout boy
    Knife to hand and an ear for danger
    Watch the treetops, taste the wind
    And through the Eyrewood safely go!


    Though we’ll ford dank streams with vim and pluck
    And cry not a whit, though the leeches suck
    If there’s just one thing that’ll dash our luck
    It’s the Eyrewood Daughters and their girlish muck!

    Daughters are weird and they don’t wear pants
    We suspect they want us to hold their hands
    But we’ll never submit - no way, no chance…
    Until our parents make us at the solstice dance

    Strong the will of a Lookout boy
    Knife to hand and an ear for danger
    Watch the treetops, taste the wind
    And through the Eyrewood safely go!

    Strong the will of a Lookout boy
    Knife to hand and an ear for danger
    Watch the treetops, taste the wind
    And through the Eyrewood safely go!

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  • KhavallKhavall British ColumbiaRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    This is incredible.

    Khavall on
  • GrathGrath I'm a much happier person these days Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    I want this more than lookouts but I want lookouts too!

    Grath on
  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    No slight to this at all, and as others have mentioned the writing is solid, but what's new? It's hard to tell a story like this and do something different, it always turns out as political commentary.

    The Lookouts has that oh-so-fresh feeling. It's a solid new concept and I bet it ends up as a stand-alone IP.

    Which would make a better Saturday morning cartoon?

    I guess what really did it for me is - the designs are gorgeous, and it's fresh stylistically, but most importantly Carl really stands out as a really great character, just from those few panels.

    I didn't get that feeling from anyone in Lookouts, much as I liked it.

    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    Orikaeshigitae on
  • Dropping LoadsDropping Loads Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I wasn't thinking about it from an art perspective, you're right about the style. I was thinking mostly on how The Lookouts felt more original, but yeah, that's not the whole story.

    Dropping Loads on
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    3clipse: The key to any successful marriage is a good mid-game transition.
  • GameGrrlGameGrrl Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    No slight to this at all, and as others have mentioned the writing is solid, but what's new? It's hard to tell a story like this and do something different, it always turns out as political commentary.

    The Lookouts has that oh-so-fresh feeling. It's a solid new concept and I bet it ends up as a stand-alone IP.

    Which would make a better Saturday morning cartoon?

    I guess what really did it for me is - the designs are gorgeous, and it's fresh stylistically, but most importantly Carl really stands out as a really great character, just from those few panels.

    I didn't get that feeling from anyone in Lookouts, much as I liked it.

    Kinda difficult with only one page actually made so far, though.

    GameGrrl on
  • CampionCampion Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    The little portrait of Carl on his ID is so nice. I can see him standing there for his big day, all dressed up. Smile, Carl, smile. The camera clicks, he gets his ID, and he is just so proud.

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  • DruhimDruhim Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009

    I think the question is really which would make a better comic.

    Hint: It's the same answer for both :)
    you're an idiot, because this is not true

    Druhim on
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  • ArtreusArtreus I'm a wizard And that looks fucked upRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Kovak wrote: »
    i feel like lookouts is going ot be the same old same old

    lol roll d20 for reflex save

    type references

    like its ground we've already been too

    I really don't think you are giving them enough credit here. Everyone is complaining about how lookouts is all more of the same but I think they can do really well with it.

    I liked the lookouts. The art was beautiful and the story promises to be great. Ideally they would do both this and lookouts. Not too interested in jim darkmagic.

    I'm just not super confident in this cop story.

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  • autono-wally, erotibot300autono-wally, erotibot300 love machine Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    WILL THERE BE MORE?

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  • AMP'dAMP'd Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    JoeUser wrote: »
    Now I'm reading through Rice Boy again!

    Rice Boy is the best

    Everybody, read Rice Boy

    You will get enough robots and enough fantasy

    AMP'd on
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  • DelzhandDelzhand Registered User, Transition Team regular
    edited June 2009
    piL wrote: »
    "they gave me no trouble" is beautiful

    No. They gave me no trouble.




    swoon

    I think what's great about the line is the ambiguity.

    Option A: Carl handled the police officers. Badass, but kinda weak in terms of realism
    Option B: Carl realized the struggle against people like that isn't worth the price of defending yourself. I like this option more.

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  • <3<3 Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    automata is too bladerunner-esque for my taste.

    <3 on
  • DruhimDruhim Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    automata is too bladerunner-esque for my taste.
    nothing can be too bladerunner

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