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New Comic 6/12/09 Automata

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  • Dropping LoadsDropping Loads Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    See, this is where I disagree. Robot vs. human "what is real?" has been done to DEATH, primarily in media other than comics, but all those stories have been told.

    From the same angle though, you could say Lookouts = The Hardy Boys + D&D.

    Within the Penny-Arcade world, there hasn't been much robot stuff(unless you count RSPOD), but so what?

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    i mean really, gabe and tycho are both super talented in their respective fields. i suspect it's basically a matter of taste.

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  • Zetetic ElenchZetetic Elench Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    automata is too bladerunner-esque for my taste.

    I don't get it. This sentence seems fine grammatically, and they're all proper person words - but it's just not making sense.

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    See, this is where I disagree. Robot vs. human "what is real?" has been done to DEATH, primarily in media other than comics, but all those stories have been told.

    From the same angle though, you could say Lookouts = The Hardy Boys + D&D.

    Within the Penny-Arcade world, there hasn't been much robot stuff(unless you count RSPOD).

    Cory Doctorow has this great quote where he compares identifying the theme of a story to dissecting it. You've got the essence, but none of the life. Fuck themes, and fuck "done to death". The only thing that matters is the execution, and automata is more solid than lookouts so far.

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  • KovakKovak did a lot of drugs married cher?Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    automata contains a page of just pouring whisky

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  • KovakKovak did a lot of drugs married cher?Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    if they put up a page of just pouring whisky it would be such a great joke

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  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Usagi wrote: »
    I think this is my favorite PA comic ever

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  • DarmakDarmak RAGE vympyvvhyc vyctyvyRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    All I can say is that I liked the fuck out of both of them. The Lookouts scratches my fantasy itch, this one scratches my robot-noir itch (I didn't even know I had that itch till now). Goddamn I wish they could do both, I don't want to decide.

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  • Dropping LoadsDropping Loads Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    ...it's basically a matter of taste.

    Intentional reference? There's an incredible detective short story by that name.

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  • DruhimDruhim Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    See, this is where I disagree. Robot vs. human "what is real?" has been done to DEATH, primarily in media other than comics, but all those stories have been told.

    From the same angle though, you could say Lookouts = The Hardy Boys + D&D.

    Within the Penny-Arcade world, there hasn't been much robot stuff(unless you count RSPOD).

    Cory Doctorow has this great quote where he compares identifying the theme of a story to dissecting it. You've got the essence, but none of the life. Fuck themes, and fuck "done to death". The only thing that matters is the execution, and automata is more solid than lookouts so far.
    Orik, I love you

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  • PHOLLENPHOLLEN Registered User new member
    edited June 2009
    Amazing! I want more! More! MORE! MOOOOORRRREEEE!!!

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  • GameGrrlGameGrrl Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    See, this is where I disagree. Robot vs. human "what is real?" has been done to DEATH, primarily in media other than comics, but all those stories have been told.

    From the same angle though, you could say Lookouts = The Hardy Boys + D&D.

    Within the Penny-Arcade world, there hasn't been much robot stuff(unless you count RSPOD), but so what?

    There's only been one page made so far, it's a little early to say that you know the concept and it's been done to death, isn't it?

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  • Der Waffle MousDer Waffle Mous Blame this on the misfortune of your birth. New Yark, New Yark.Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Darmak wrote: »
    Goddamn I wish they could do both, I don't want to decide.

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  • Dropping LoadsDropping Loads Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I wasn't saying they COULDN'T do something new with this, I was responding to the comment that I didn't think it had more POTENTIAL.

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  • MeizMeiz Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    This is fantastic.

    It reminds me of a novel I read by K. W. Jeter called Noir.

    I don't have anything to suggest on improvements other then make more please.

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    ...it's basically a matter of taste.

    Intentional reference? There's an incredible detective short story by that name.

    no, it's just apophenia

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    I wasn't saying they COULDN'T do something new with this, I was responding to the comment that I didn't think it had more POTENTIAL.

    Yeah, because whether or not you think he's a good writer has any bearing on whether or not you think that steatement is true.

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  • jimenexjimenex Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Amazing work...They should write these two as a graphic novels.

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  • MysstMysst King Monkey of Hedonism IslandRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    See, this is where I disagree. Robot vs. human "what is real?" has been done to DEATH, primarily in media other than comics, but all those stories have been told.

    From the same angle though, you could say Lookouts = The Hardy Boys + D&D.

    Within the Penny-Arcade world, there hasn't been much robot stuff(unless you count RSPOD).

    Cory Doctorow has this great quote where he compares identifying the theme of a story to dissecting it. You've got the essence, but none of the life. Fuck themes, and fuck "done to death". The only thing that matters is the execution, and automata is more solid than lookouts so far.
    orik I like you lots

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  • Metal JaredMetal Jared Mulligan Wizard Rhode IslandRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I wish we could get a podcast for this page as well as the Darkmagic page. One of the reasons why I really enjoyed Lookouts so much (other than the beautiful artwork and writing) was how the podcast gave it perspective.

    The first pannel of Lookouts seems out of place until you hear them talking about the boys getting ready to go out and performing the ritual of putting on their uniform. The podcast did alot to show that "yeah this was going to be a joke but after we thought about it we think this is just a really good idea". They talk about the phrase "May we die in the forest" and it goes from a joke to an actual achievement which completely changes how you look at the page. Then when they explored the world more and set up the Eyrewood and the roadways in the news posts you can look at the page again and it changes. This isn't going out to the forest for some type of fun trip, this is their world and they need people who can traverse it.

    In hopes of fairness and in order for us to all make the best decision we can I hope we get as much perspective of the Automata world as we did the Lookouts world. Right now all the background we have is from Epic Legends of the Magic Sword Kings and Tycho's post:
    Tycho wrote:
    The second concept is Automata, nineteen-twenties crime fiction which unfolds in a time where "machine intellect" has been outlawed. It wasn't always, certainly, and the problem of what to do with the existing "stock" of fully sentient, mechanical citizens endures. Detective Regal and his stenophone Carl Swangee traverse the margin where these worlds overlap.

    I hope we get a little more later on in the day.

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  • MeissnerdMeissnerd Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    i feel like this has more of a direction than lookouts. I hate to say it but there were too many characters introduced in Lookouts, you know? All those kids could have stories and I feel like Tycho could be pulled in a bunch of different directions. This is just Automata.

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  • sgt scruffiansgt scruffian Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Simply amazing. Gabe never ceases to amaze me with his increasingly detailed and colorful art style. I'm not sure if I like this one of the Lookouts more. Lookouts definitely has a better chance at comedy, but there could be a great story involved in Automata. Personally, I am not a fan of mysteries, so I see myself siding with Lookouts, but I wish they could both come to fruition.

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  • el_vicioel_vicio Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    See, this is where I disagree. Robot vs. human "what is real?" has been done to DEATH, primarily in media other than comics, but all those stories have been told.

    From the same angle though, you could say Lookouts = The Hardy Boys + D&D.

    Within the Penny-Arcade world, there hasn't been much robot stuff(unless you count RSPOD).

    Cory Doctorow has this great quote where he compares identifying the theme of a story to dissecting it. You've got the essence, but none of the life. Fuck themes, and fuck "done to death". The only thing that matters is the execution, and automata is more solid than lookouts so far.
    All hail.

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  • link gets the girllink gets the girl Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Yeah, this is pretty stunning work. I would easily read a book of this. I can't wait to see what comes next. Whatever it is though, it'll be hardpressed to beat Automata.

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  • DruhimDruhim Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    Cory Doctorow is also not a good author =P

    I better run now while I still can!

    I wasn't saying they COULDN'T do something new with this, I was responding to the comment that I didn't think it had more POTENTIAL.
    How good of an author he is has no bearing on the truth of his statement. Potential isn't what matters, execution is. Countless authors have taken interesting ideas and ruined them with terrible execution. There is nothing novel about that, plenty of people do it. However, a really good author doesn't need "fresh" ideas. They can take a concept that's been covered countless times and with superb execution make it stand out as an excellent piece of work.

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  • Zetetic ElenchZetetic Elench Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I just realised what Carl's license says.
    Mr. Carl Swangee is hereby licensed to operate for the period of twelve months

    Operate.

    Chills.

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  • Metzger MeisterMetzger Meister It Gets Worse before it gets any better.Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I wonder if the boys have been approached by any major comic book publishers.

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  • stoolpigeonstoolpigeon Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    It is a tough call - I wish it were not. But I must confess that I would still rather see Lookouts - this intrigues me, that grabbed me on a visceral level.

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  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Druhim wrote: »
    Yeah. I think there's a lot more *potential* in Automata. Lookouts, while awesome, is basically going to be the same feeling/style as the Deep Crow arc.

    See, this is where I disagree. Robot vs. human "what is real?" has been done to DEATH, primarily in media other than comics, but all those stories have been told.

    From the same angle though, you could say Lookouts = The Hardy Boys + D&D.

    Within the Penny-Arcade world, there hasn't been much robot stuff(unless you count RSPOD).

    Cory Doctorow has this great quote where he compares identifying the theme of a story to dissecting it. You've got the essence, but none of the life. Fuck themes, and fuck "done to death". The only thing that matters is the execution, and automata is more solid than lookouts so far.
    Orik, I love you

    This thread is basically just going to be me repeating things that other people have said. Orik is a treasure.

    The main thing is that you can have an element of the setting without it being the theme. The prejudice towards robots could be flavor to the story, and not represent the substance of it.

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  • Dropping LoadsDropping Loads Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    The only thing that matters is the execution, and automata is more solid than lookouts so far.

    I disagree. As you said, it's a matter of taste.

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  • denihilistdenihilist Ancient and Mighty Registered User, Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited June 2009
    I would be down for the following schedule:
    Monday - Lookouts
    Wednesday - Penny-Arcade Proper
    Friday - Automata, unless the next thing is tons better.

    Honestly, I wasn't really drawn into the Automata world. I can see a lot of potential, it just didn't grab me right off the bat.

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  • ThawmusThawmus +Jackface Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I like how it's a bit of a Daneel Ovilaw thing, but backwards.

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    I just realised what Carl's license says.
    Mr. Carl Swangee is hereby licensed to operate for the period of twelve months

    Operate.

    Chills.

    i know! that's my favourite part!

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  • MeissnerdMeissnerd Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    denihilist wrote: »
    I would be down for the following schedule:
    Monday - Lookouts
    Wednesday - Penny-Arcade Proper
    Friday - Automata, unless the next thing is tons better.

    Honestly, I wasn't really drawn into the Automata world. I can see a lot of potential, it just didn't grab me right off the bat.

    This would be excellent.

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  • OrsinoOrsino Registered User new member
    edited June 2009
    I liked the scouts a lot, and Automata is even better. Really, G&T, I would have been quite happy with your usual wang jokes, but this is thrilling stuff. I would buy it. :^:

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  • sundayssundays Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Meissnerd wrote: »
    denihilist wrote: »
    I would be down for the following schedule:
    Monday - Lookouts
    Wednesday - Penny-Arcade Proper
    Friday - Automata, unless the next thing is tons better.

    Honestly, I wasn't really drawn into the Automata world. I can see a lot of potential, it just didn't grab me right off the bat.

    This would be excellent.

    i'd buy the book, but following a continuous story at a pace of one page per week is tedious

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  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I never did like the heads on these Swangee men.

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  • MysstMysst King Monkey of Hedonism IslandRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    wordsy people, tell me what swangee is from, if anything

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  • DruhimDruhim Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2009
    Mysst wrote: »
    wordsy people, tell me what swangee is from, if anything
    it's the name of the model that Carl is

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  • autono-wally, erotibot300autono-wally, erotibot300 love machine Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I love the atmosphere of this so much somehow. I read those few panels and I want a whole world made out of it

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