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The_monarch23's summer sketch dump (critique me, seymour!)

the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
edited July 2009 in Artist's Corner
Bought a new sketch book recently. Been playing around in it. Anyone know how to make scanned in pics in photoshop better looking? Thank You.

Character development for something I'm working on.
Deuo.jpg

Greek goddess thingy... just playing with the pose mostly. My wife called it "sexy" :)
Goddess.jpg

Superman needs love too!
Supes.jpg

More to come... eventually.

"Gott in himmel! Fritz, vee haff named our car after ein lady-garten."
~Jeremy Clarkson
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    worstcaseworstcase Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    My only complaint is that superman read as a girl to me first. I mean NOW i know its a guy, but something about it read as chick.

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    the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    worstcase wrote: »
    My only complaint is that superman read as a girl to me first. I mean NOW i know its a guy, but something about it read as chick.

    Hmm.. good point. Should I make the jaw more square, the nose more chiseled? I see what you mean, but I don't know exactly how to fix it. Thank you for the critique.

    edit: OH, and the lips on the girl in teh superman photo need to move downwards too, but I had erased on that spot about 12 times trying to get her lips right and the paper was wearing thin.

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    the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    I think supes needs a thicker brow, smaller, squintier eyes and a stronger jaw. Am I incorrect?

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    NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    the_monarch23 wrote: »
    Anyone know how to make scanned in pics in photoshop better looking?

    Are you scanning pencils into Photoshop? Try scanning in grayscale and then messing around with levels/curves.

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    worstcaseworstcase Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    I think you hit the nail on the head about the jaw/nose/brow stuff. I DO like your character expressions though!

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    ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    try drawing your womens' eyelashes in a solid mascara mass instead of individually.

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    the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    ManonvonSuperock wrote: »
    try drawing your womens' eyelashes in a solid mascara mass instead of individually.

    Will do, I'll post the inks sometime in the near future. Thanks all for the critiques.

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    the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    worstcase wrote: »
    I think you hit the nail on the head about the jaw/nose/brow stuff. I DO like your character expressions though!

    Sweet! I have been trying to work on expressions. Thanks.

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    ~Jeremy Clarkson
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