I fixed up the color a bunch, I think it's final at the point where I'd actually be glad to look at this as my wallpaper. YAY!! Thanks guys!
EDIT: I took advice and looked at the tutorial and other tutorials... I think it's a big improvement, I just did the whole thing again from the ground up.
What do you guys think?
I haven't really used Photoshop for original works that much until now, I've know how it works and how to do stuff, but I wanted to start experimenting with it.
So yeah, this wallpaper I did based on this
comic of mine in one of my first PS endeavors, it'll probably be a while before I really get smoother with it. But any tips in the mean time?