Possible poster for my uni's lgbta fall events. Spoilered for vscroll. Spent about half an hour on this to prove that we could put the entire schedule onto one poster.
BRO LET ME GET REAL WITH YOU AND SAY THAT MY FINGERS ARE PREPPED AND HOT LIKE THE SURFACE OF THE SUN TO BRING RADICAL BEATS SO SMOOTH THE SHIT WILL BE MEDICINAL-GRADE TRIPNASTY MAKING ALL BRAINWAVES ROLL ON THE SURFACE OF A BALLS-FEISTY NEURAL RAINBOW CRACKA-LACKIN' YOUR PERCEPTION OF THE HERE-NOW SPACE-TIME SITUATION THAT ALL OF LIFE BE JAMMED UP IN THROUGH THE UNIVERSAL FLOW BEATS
I have a doodle! A value sketch, even. I'm learning how to paint. It's rough.
Linked because I'm not sure about the nakedness. Probably NSFW, but not all hypersex.
also, DR, I praised you in the top of Page 6, and you did not respond. this makes me:
Sorry chum. Thanks (everyone) for the upward thumbs. I've been working more on it. It's looking ace. Feeling much better about the exhibtion now that painting has come together. (It fills a lot of space :P)
What's the story here? I don't think you're using the formal elements to your greatest advantage. You should be able to tell the whole story through the composition.
I like the colors, but the way you've rendered a few things is sort of weird. The coattail looks rigid and almost stone-like. The boot looks like shiny rubber. The cookie looks like it has measles rather than chocolate chips.
What were you attempting there with the speech bubble's style? It looks a bit tacky, to be honest.
Coattail is bumfucked, totally. I probably need a ref, but just couldn't be arsed fixing it, since this is just a warmup sketch. The boot IS shiny rubber :P
I dunno, the speech bubble was just supposed to be wibbly. His eyes looked creepy so I wanted a creepy speech bubble. I really didn't put much thought into this on any level, seriously.
I didn't really set out to draw a steampunk Penny Wise... but it popped into my head somehow, so there ya go. I like where it's going though, so I'll probably go about finishing it eventually.
I like the arm, but that seems like a bad place to put a gauge.
Ya know that actually crossed my mind, but then I thought "well it's a mechanical arm (or strength amplifying glove?) that runs on steam. There's not really any logic to it anyway and I like how it looks." So I left it there. Perhaps it would be better on the forearm...
I like the arm, but that seems like a bad place to put a gauge.
Ya know that actually crossed my mind, but then I thought "well it's a mechanical arm (or strength amplifying glove?) that runs on steam. There's not really any logic to it anyway and I like how it looks." So I left it there. Perhaps it would be better on the forearm...
I'd just be all, "shit my gas gauge is broken!" then you have to drag your big heavy steam powered arm to the gas station because you didn't know you were out of arm-gas.
Because the steam made the arm lighter.
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I don't think you're using the formal elements to your greatest advantage.
I have absolutely no idea what you mean by this. Please elaborate. What are these "formal elements" you speak of?
As for the story it's a bunch of british naval explorers investigating a cave, which is housed by a bunch of feral women with spears and big booties. It seemed pretty straight forward to me, is this not coming across?
Also does the pose really look like she's taking a crap? Spent fucking hours getting that pose looking balanced.
Formal elements such as POV, color, composition etc etc. You have the basics coming across, it reads as such 'guys coming to island, which is inhabited by tribal women'. Not much more comes from the image, such as 'how does this woman feel about it? is she okay with it? is she about to ambush them? Are the guys peaceful? Are they coming to fuck shit up? Are they rich as shit?' shit like that. The subtleties of the narrative.
And yes it looks like she taking a crap. And off balance. :P
also, DR, I praised you in the top of Page 6, and you did not respond. this makes me:
Sorry chum. Thanks (everyone) for the upward thumbs. I've been working more on it. It's looking ace. Feeling much better about the exhibtion now that painting has come together. (It fills a lot of space :P)
I only pointed it out because I guess I want to ask you: would you take a commission for a tattoo design down the line? I was thinking of those "horses" or something else in that ink style.
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BRO LET ME GET REAL WITH YOU AND SAY THAT MY FINGERS ARE PREPPED AND HOT LIKE THE SURFACE OF THE SUN TO BRING RADICAL BEATS SO SMOOTH THE SHIT WILL BE MEDICINAL-GRADE TRIPNASTY MAKING ALL BRAINWAVES ROLL ON THE SURFACE OF A BALLS-FEISTY NEURAL RAINBOW CRACKA-LACKIN' YOUR PERCEPTION OF THE HERE-NOW SPACE-TIME SITUATION THAT ALL OF LIFE BE JAMMED UP IN THROUGH THE UNIVERSAL FLOW BEATS
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Well fuck, eh I'm just gonna knock this one on the head. Thanks for that Sub, I'll take all that into consideration for the next one.
BRO LET ME GET REAL WITH YOU AND SAY THAT MY FINGERS ARE PREPPED AND HOT LIKE THE SURFACE OF THE SUN TO BRING RADICAL BEATS SO SMOOTH THE SHIT WILL BE MEDICINAL-GRADE TRIPNASTY MAKING ALL BRAINWAVES ROLL ON THE SURFACE OF A BALLS-FEISTY NEURAL RAINBOW CRACKA-LACKIN' YOUR PERCEPTION OF THE HERE-NOW SPACE-TIME SITUATION THAT ALL OF LIFE BE JAMMED UP IN THROUGH THE UNIVERSAL FLOW BEATS
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Don't worry, Tynic. I'm just making a new list of people I wouldn't feel guilty for shitting in their mouths.
Hey I saw odosketch on an art reddit, and that first one was a featured sketch.
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Well I just don't know what to think.
Something is cataclysmically wrong.
Oh hey, so it is. Their selection criteria are pretty abstruse.
Frankly it's kind of a shitty program but I keep trying it to see if I can do better.
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Neither do I. >_>
also, DR, I praised you in the top of Page 6, and you did not respond. this makes me:
BoTP
Linked because I'm not sure about the nakedness. Probably NSFW, but not all hypersex.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/56544441@N00/3975915769/sizes/o/
Sorry chum. Thanks (everyone) for the upward thumbs. I've been working more on it. It's looking ace. Feeling much better about the exhibtion now that painting has come together. (It fills a lot of space :P)
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I like the colors, but the way you've rendered a few things is sort of weird. The coattail looks rigid and almost stone-like. The boot looks like shiny rubber. The cookie looks like it has measles rather than chocolate chips.
What were you attempting there with the speech bubble's style? It looks a bit tacky, to be honest.
I dunno, the speech bubble was just supposed to be wibbly. His eyes looked creepy so I wanted a creepy speech bubble. I really didn't put much thought into this on any level, seriously.
1. drapery
2. sartorial styles of 19th century french despots
3. how to draw cookies
god I have so far to go.
edit: no but seriously thanks for spotting this stuff and I'll fix it a bit just so I don't feel like a lazy bum.
I didn't really set out to draw a steampunk Penny Wise... but it popped into my head somehow, so there ya go. I like where it's going though, so I'll probably go about finishing it eventually.
I'd just be all, "shit my gas gauge is broken!" then you have to drag your big heavy steam powered arm to the gas station because you didn't know you were out of arm-gas.
Because the steam made the arm lighter.
I have absolutely no idea what you mean by this. Please elaborate. What are these "formal elements" you speak of?
As for the story it's a bunch of british naval explorers investigating a cave, which is housed by a bunch of feral women with spears and big booties. It seemed pretty straight forward to me, is this not coming across?
Also does the pose really look like she's taking a crap? Spent fucking hours getting that pose looking balanced.
And yes it looks like she taking a crap. And off balance. :P
Otherwise I like it.
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