Hey guys, I'm new.
I'm just looking for a bit of input on this rough draft I made. I know, I know, another video game based comic. I'm not trying to compete with the humongous behemoth that is Penny-Arcade (I'm also positive my art and comedy writing is up to par) But I figured this place is probably the best for critique and honest opinion.
Once again, this is a rough draft and hasn't been coloured or cleaned up. I just want to see how I can improve on any aspect in terms of style, writing (even though there isn't much) and how funny it is compared to what most people post on these forums.