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Webcomic and Website crits (Trouble Ticket Comic)
amateurhour
One day I'll be professionalhourThe woods somewhere in TennesseeRegistered User regular
One day I'll be professionalhourThe woods somewhere in TennesseeRegistered User regular
I posted here like a year and a half ago, but I can't find the thread anymore, so I made a new one. If that's the wrong way to do it, then I apologize in advance.
In April 2008 I started up a blog/podcast with the idea of doing a webcomic. I made a few strips and displayed them here but it needed a LOT of work, so I took some time off, worked on it, and launched the site again in October. It's a little more polished now, but I know it still needs some work. I've managed to get 50 comics in the archive, worked on the site layout a bit more, and I feel it's ready to present again.
I'm looking for crits on everything from the comic to site design. I know there's probably a lot that needs to be done. I'll start with a few comics from the beginning, when it was black and white, and then show some from about #38 onward, where I went to color.
Early Stuff
After I learned how to use photoshop a little better
After I added color to the mix
And as a special BONUS, the guest strip my wife (who is a much better artist than me) did while I was away at a friends bachelor party... (seriously, this was the first comic she ever drew, and the first time ever using a scanner, or photoshop, or coloring anything on a computer)
My new year's resolution is to actually work up the nerve to post my stuff here, and get crits, and hopefully make a better comic that people want to read.
Thanks!
edit: one thing I forgot to mention was the technical aspects. Site is running wordpress with studiopress and the stripshow comic plugin. Also, I know absolutely nothing about photoshop. I have a friend who was super generous and gave me his copy of PS CS3 when he upgraded, and I have that, but I really have no clue how to use it for anything other than basic tasks. I got the How to Make Webcomics book when it came out and I'm using Brad Guigar's 14 step comic scanning and editing process to produce the finished work. I'd love some PS pointers on how to make the colors look better, or good reference tutorials, etc.
Thanks again
In April 2008 I started up a blog/podcast with the idea of doing a webcomic. I made a few strips and displayed them here but it needed a LOT of work, so I took some time off, worked on it, and launched the site again in October. It's a little more polished now, but I know it still needs some work. I've managed to get 50 comics in the archive, worked on the site layout a bit more, and I feel it's ready to present again.
I'm looking for crits on everything from the comic to site design. I know there's probably a lot that needs to be done. I'll start with a few comics from the beginning, when it was black and white, and then show some from about #38 onward, where I went to color.
Early Stuff
After I learned how to use photoshop a little better
After I added color to the mix
And as a special BONUS, the guest strip my wife (who is a much better artist than me) did while I was away at a friends bachelor party... (seriously, this was the first comic she ever drew, and the first time ever using a scanner, or photoshop, or coloring anything on a computer)
My new year's resolution is to actually work up the nerve to post my stuff here, and get crits, and hopefully make a better comic that people want to read.
Thanks!
edit: one thing I forgot to mention was the technical aspects. Site is running wordpress with studiopress and the stripshow comic plugin. Also, I know absolutely nothing about photoshop. I have a friend who was super generous and gave me his copy of PS CS3 when he upgraded, and I have that, but I really have no clue how to use it for anything other than basic tasks. I got the How to Make Webcomics book when it came out and I'm using Brad Guigar's 14 step comic scanning and editing process to produce the finished work. I'd love some PS pointers on how to make the colors look better, or good reference tutorials, etc.
Thanks again
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I just needed a setup so that the comic wasn't "hey man, want to play mass effect 2 to set up this mass effect 2 joke?" I see what you're saying though. My writing needs a lot of work.
It does, but in mass effect the red and blue options are never exactly matched to what happens on screen. Also, I didn't know how to pull it off in three panels, unless the third panel was just the guy on the right getting pistol whipped, and I just realized that would have been better.
Yeah, that's partially the fault of my lineart, and partially because I colored the hair and eyebrows differently so you can't tell now that his eyebrow is arched downwards. Not really sure how I should fix that. Opacity on the eyebrow, or hair?
Thanks a lot of this. I didn't realize how badly I was doing it until now. I'll fix that in future comics. Would it be better going between the panel borders or should it stay below the comic.
I thought it would come off as angry. Is there a better way to do an angry balloon tail? Or do I just not bother with it?
Thanks, just noticed the ear frames, going to try to actually fix that on this comic in PS. Just the ear frame or something else?
Thank you for all of the feedback Nib. That was helpful
Check out this tut for some comic lettering guidelines.
Seriously though, I'm a photoshop idiot. Case in point, my first thirty or so comics, I don't have good masters of, aside from rescanning the original art, and they all ended up as one flattened layer. Is there a good tutorial you can recommend for scanning line art, and also, if I am going to hand draw the comic, what types of pen do you recommend? I'm using a strathmore 11 X 14 bristol board with micron pens currently.
When you save, make sure you save one at full resolution as a .psd so it saves your layer information and then shrink it down and save a copy as .jpg or .png or whatever. I use the GIMP instead of PS, but the principle is the same.
I used the micron pens for years and they work well but for the past 5 years or so I've switched to the PITT artist pens:
I just prefer the quality of the ink and they seem to last a bit longer.
I don't deny that it would be easier to scan, but I draw really large. I'll give it a try though and see if I can just shrink the panels to 3.5 inches instead of 4.
I need to just learn to use my wacom, but it's difficult
Depends on who you ask.