Wise man once say: First page of web comic never good. Persist and do better on page 2.
That being said, I would like to hear some of your wisdoms about it.
I've read other threads, made bad attempts at them, and posted in a few.
I don't think it looks awful, at least by my own standards, but who am I to judge my own work?
Anyone who knows me on these forums knows that I will not only accept criticism, but usually act on it inside the given thread. I am prepared to hear anything ... I think.