Hey guys, recently my uni work has required me to draw up storyboards on quite a regular basis. Sometimes i'm the one who has to produce the animation, but more often than not i hand the boards over to someone else to animate.
I've really been enjoying this process and i'd like to improve as much as i can, so are there any artists out there who would/could crit my on composition and stuff? I'm mostly interested in how you think they work as story boards rather than the quality of the art (but if you think the art is hindering the message then let me know) but all input would be more than welcome
I suppose the first and most important thing i need to know is, do you understand what is going on. Because if you don't it's very likely the animators won't either D:
Here's a quick story board i did a couple of days ago for an advertisement promoting a brand of vegetarian meat pies called 'nom noms' (i didn't come up with the name) featuring the brands mascot 'V-Rex'
The grey arrows denote camera movement, where the black arrows indicate object movement.
let me know what you think