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Working on threadless designs

SnowbirdSnowbird Registered User regular
edited April 2010 in Artist's Corner
Hi,

I've lurked here for a few years and thought, since i'm finally starting to create more, i'd post a few threadless designs i'm working on to get some critiques. I'll post them all on the t-shirt template to start, but i can post larger sizes if that's easier too.


This one is called "Billy the Kid"

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and this one is "Spaghetti Western"

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    BroloBrolo Broseidon Lord of the BroceanRegistered User regular
    edited April 2010
    Cute designs, but the placement seems like you just took a poster and stuck it on the front of a shirt.

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    NappuccinoNappuccino Surveyor of Things and Stuff Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    yeah, the billy the kid one would look better if the goat was on the lefter side of the shirt and the weed thing on the right (dont flip it, just move each piece individually)

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    SnowbirdSnowbird Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    I tried shifting the two around a little more and added some shadows.

    Thanks for your critiques so far.


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    NappuccinoNappuccino Surveyor of Things and Stuff Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    My bad, when i said "lefter side of the shirt" I didn't mean the shirts left, I meant our left :(

    That does look pretty good though, but I do think it would look better the way i meant it.

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    Rorus Raz wrote: »
    There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.

    Angel_of_Bacon wrote: »
    Not even BEAR vaginas can defeat me!
    cakemikz wrote: »
    And then I rub actual cake on myself.
    Loomdun wrote: »
    thats why you have chest helmets
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    mensch-o-maticmensch-o-matic Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    I dont know about letting the tumble weed cut off at the end of the shirt-maybe placing it behind the goat and making it a bit smaller? Not feeling the shadows, either. Cute idea and otherwise fine execution, though!

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    DarkWarriorDarkWarrior __BANNED USERS regular
    edited April 2010
    That meatball one is super cute but its real world positioning would probably be awkward and conceal some of the image around the side of the person wearing it. Might be worth shrinking it down.

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    MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    The boots look all sorts of wrong, I think it would work better without them.
    The hat, scarfe and holster do more than enough to say that this goat is an outlaw.

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    IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator mod
    edited April 2010
    I highly suggest working with shirts on people for placement, Because it'll help you see the shirt a little better. Honestly the template they offer is a little too short/wide in my opinion. There's a flicker shirt group for threadless and you should take advantage of it:
    http://www.flickr.com/groups/lessthread/pool/

    iRoco makes awesome model-less templates.

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    SnowbirdSnowbird Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    Thanks, i'll check out that flickr pool as well.

    I changed the Billy The Kid one a little. Just small placement changes.

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    Also here is a new spaghetti western version.

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    ParadiseParadise Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    The new spaghetti western design is adorable.

    Here's a version that resembles some spaghetti I was given at a restaurant recently:
    spaghettiwestern.jpg

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    MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    Is that hair a.......a pubic hair? D:

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    ParadiseParadise Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    I don't know, and I don't want to know!

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    flowerhoneyflowerhoney Registered User regular
    edited April 2010
    oh my god his little legs are SO CUTE

    that shirt is wonderful

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