Automata fan art

graavigalagraavigala Registered User
edited July 2010 in Artist's Corner
Hello all!
New timer in here forums but long time fan of PennyArcade :D

heres a fan pic I made of Automata

see below

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  • VistiVisti Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    No, here's a fan pic you made of Automata:
    Automata___Would_it_end____by_GravedFish.jpg

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  • graavigalagraavigala Registered User
    edited July 2010
    Visti wrote: »
    No, here's a fan pic you made of Automata:

    thank you for doing that :) i tried to do same but failed :D

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    That's pretty cool

    one thing though: it's kind of hard to differentiate the arms- there's no real sense of depth
    it could be because of the density of detail in them

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Pretty cool.
    Tam wrote:
    it's kind of hard to differentiate the arms- there's no real sense of depth
    it could be because of the density of detail in them

    True, I honestly don't know what you could do to fix it though.
    It's not really a big deal either way, it's not the the arms look like a huddled mass or anything.

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  • MangoesMangoes Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Mustang wrote: »
    Pretty cool.
    Tam wrote:
    it's kind of hard to differentiate the arms- there's no real sense of depth
    it could be because of the density of detail in them

    True, I honestly don't know what you could do to fix it though.
    It's not really a big deal either way, it's not the the arms look like a huddled mass or anything.
    Probably just make the lines a tad bit thicker on the closer arm.

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  • nakirushnakirush Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    What CapnMango said, and also less detail on the far arm.

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  • winter_combat_knightwinter_combat_knight Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Really badass!

    Yeah i reckon thicken the closer arm, and simplify the other arm a little with less detail.

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  • KooberzKooberz Registered User
    edited July 2010
    "Microsoft Windows. It'll make your robot want to kill itself."

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  • KalTorakKalTorak One way or another, they all end up in the Undercity.Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    The light seems to be coming through the window to the left and illuminating him as well as parts of the tubes (the rest of the tubes in shadow), but there's no corresponding shadow in the lit outline of the window on the wall. You could add that shadow of him on the wall, plus some shadow on his upper left arm - that would help distinguish it from the right arm.

    Other than that, it looks really cool.

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  • pineappleherbpineappleherb Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    if anything make it all black under his arm/chest, like this:

    sdsdv.png


    gives it a little more depth imo

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