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Beav's Stuff (nsfw): How Much is that Bugatti in the Window (finished on 15)

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    dinosaur be gone?

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  • SarksusSarksus Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    Sadly yes.

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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator mod
    edited October 2010
    Nitpicky cardork things:

    I think as a result of how you're working out the perspective, you may have elongated the side/rear end a bit. Also, the squaring off of the sort of half moon side vents and giving a angle bump at the rear end rather than curving smoothly down makes the rear end look a bit more like a Lancia Stratos or a Countach. You also might want to reconsider the rear window- obviously you've had more first hand observation than I have, but I'm pretty sure you can't see much out of the back due to where the engine is, and the 2 big pillar things in the back.

    Tried to do a drawover but it kinda blows...(few things more frustrating than try to tell someone what they should do when you can't do it yourself in order to prove the point!)
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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    tam: fixed?

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    edit: bacon sweet, thanks dude i'll look at tweaking perspective when i get home!

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  • TamTam Le Buggeur Risible Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    yeah, the dark shadow does it for me

    hahaha that's two times now that you've fixed a problem only to find someone found something else in the intervening time

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    it's cause i fix problems too quickly
    oh well!
    i'll let the problems pile up while i'm at dinner, then do a big fix!

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    bacon wrote:
    rear end look a bit more like a Lancia Stratos or a Countach.

    I could kiss you in a non-homosexual way sometimes bacon. That's exactly what I thought of the back end, but in fitting with beavo's style, I think these kind of inconsistencies provide some of the charm to her work.

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  • PierceNeckPierceNeck Simi Valley, CARegistered User regular
    edited October 2010
    I know you guys moved on and all but I'd take a 70 Chevelle SS over all those. But I'm a super fan of the muscle car era.

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    well fine then, i'm sending back this bugatti i bought you, pierce.
    it had a big bow on it and everything :(
    i just threw it in the garbage.

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  • PierceNeckPierceNeck Simi Valley, CARegistered User regular
    edited October 2010
    :(
    Even more :( because you lied.

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    I do not lie
    I just.. exaggerate

    see I made you a drawing on paper of a bugatti
    and inside the car was you and me and we were really happy and were best friends
    I crumpled it up and threw it in the garbage.

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  • PierceNeckPierceNeck Simi Valley, CARegistered User regular
    edited October 2010
    Now I'm even more sad, and I'm going to cry into my pillow until I fall asleep. And later die of dehydration because of all the water I lost through crying. So you basically just killed me, I hope you're happy.

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    noooooo i... i lied.... i kept the drawing
    i framed it

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    So i think I fixed the perspective issues on my bugatti drawing
    bacon? I feel like it looks more buggati-esque now

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    also prox:

    lightened up that foreground drill, i'm liking it (you may need to refresh to see the change)

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  • PROXPROX Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    cookin wit gas! much nicer beavs. Now the pumps got life.

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    agreed!
    thanks all for your awesome crits!
    they are really adding some nice shine to my portfolio :)

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    beavotron wrote: »
    So i think I fixed the perspective issues on my bugatti drawing
    bacon? I feel like it looks more buggati-esque now

    bugatti_colors4.jpg
    bumping this onto this page.

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  • DraperDraper __BANNED USERS
    edited October 2010
    You would make amazing Hallmark cards.

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator mod
    edited October 2010
    The rough line for the windshield and its unevenness bugs me. The style of the rest is very clean and smooth so it doesn't quite fit. Maybe I'm the only one. Perspective looks much better!

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  • EdcrabEdcrab Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    I thought maybe the wavery rough line was because it was distorted a little behind the glass but perhaps I'm looking too far into it

    But hey, either way I'm digging the Veyron picture a lot

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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator mod
    edited October 2010
    beavotron wrote: »
    So i think I fixed the perspective issues on my bugatti drawing
    bacon? I feel like it looks more buggati-esque now

    Yeah, this definitely feels better now. :^:

    I do agree with Bombs on the windshield line issue, though.

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  • SarksusSarksus Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    Now I can't unsee it!

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    I think the pattern on the windshield looks fine because it forms the shape of the rear frame and back windshield. I also think the color itself could be more subdued to not attract the eye quite so much to the windshield though.

    I am in complete agreement on Beavs making beautiful Hallmark cards.

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator mod
    edited October 2010
    The edge of the windshield I mean, not the silhouette in the middle.

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited October 2010
    I'll fix that as soon as I roll out of bed. Thanks bomberderder

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