Arch wrote: »
I never expected this burn from captain bushmeat
amateurhour wrote: »
You have more than one comic on your site. Please don't just post one here and then link your site. It either looks like you're just site whoring by barely skirting the rules or that you only have one comic drawn and you're already looking for feedback. It's going to make a lot of people not click your site, and this advice is coming from someone who made a LOT of mistakes trying to showcase his (failed, but soon to be reborn) comic in the past.
Moving past that...
Your art style is super simple, but really nice in my opinion. However if you're going to have a simple art style, your writing has to be fucking amazing, and unfortunately it's not. This one though made me laugh...
Also, I'd stay away from color strips. This one looks like it doesn't belong and it doesn't match the art style of your other strips.
Okay, these two made me laugh a little too, but both of them need some work. The first one shouldn't have the grandpa, and the second should have something besides just the graph...
You're not terrible. I get kind of a Cyanide and Happiness meets XKCD meets PBF vibe, which means it's a little confusing because your writing and joke telling varies a lot from strip to strip. Keep at it though. I feel like some of your jokes are super safe and some are super dirty, you should find a happy medium and try to stick to that.
On a more website critical note, you've got a fair amount of comics. Wordpress, with either webcomic + inkblot, comicpress, or stripShow (which I prefer) are free and web hosting with a domain name is less than $100 a year now. I'd move your stuff over to a dedicated site with a better layout since you don't seem to have problems updating regularly, which is a really good thing.