So, I'm trying to branch out and use different styles. I'd really like some more constructive criticism!
If you don't like the art, I'm cool if you say "I hated it. It made me want to kill myself." Just tell me why you hated it, and, if you're really nice, how to fix it.
I realize this one's a bit like Ctr Alt Del - I think it might be the roundness of the eyes, as well as the proportions of the characters.
The art is not great, and it's sort of Far Side. Just tell me if it works or not - is it at least easy enough on the eyes that you can stand to look at it?