Thanks guys! Sometimes it is a little soul-crushing to hear better punchlines after I've got the strip done (flat fletcher shouting splash is fantastic).
But it makes me think more about joke construction, which I guess is the point of getting criticism!
i will find your mouth while you sleep, and I will lay my mouth-gremlin eggs inside of it
go ahead and rat me out if you want to; you know the consequences
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Fletcher, you da man.
I don't know what to recommend to remedy this, other than to listen to better bands than Pink Floyd.
I was kinda pressed for time so it wasn't particularly inventive, I'll try to make up for it with the next one!
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There, I got a *Rudy* inspired chant going for you.
I don't know whether it is because I've been in the water too long, or because the leeches have taken all of my blood
either way, I would like to get out now please
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I can't describe it, but it feels incomplete
And it was just him shouting splash.
But it makes me think more about joke construction, which I guess is the point of getting criticism!
go ahead and rat me out if you want to; you know the consequences
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