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evilapathy
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December 2011
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new attempt at a web comic, part 1
feed back would be appreciated
thank you
Baz
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m3nace
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December 2011
You know, there is an edit button ;)
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Mustang
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December 2011
This is more of a story book with pictures than a comic.
You need to work on telling more of your story with the images; text in a comic is should only be used to fill in the blanks, not drive the story.
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evilapathy
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December 2011
part 2
Mustang thanks for the feedback, it is not a traditional comic format. i Like drawing a short story.
Peace xx
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You need to work on telling more of your story with the images; text in a comic is should only be used to fill in the blanks, not drive the story.
Mustang thanks for the feedback, it is not a traditional comic format. i Like drawing a short story.
Peace xx