Hey everybody, I'm new to this forum so hopefully I'm not breaking any rules and what not. I will tread lightly. Anyways, for my new project I decided to use a storybook format similar to a children's book. My question is 'does it work as a narrative' and 'do you think it can still be considered a graphic novel/comic book'? Maybe it's simply an illustrated novel, I don't know.
Here are three pages from the book, let me know what you think. I'm a masochist so bring on the harsh criticism.