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Also, if you're doing a value study, you should make sure the reference is in black and white silly!
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Tortillons are for pushing media around after it's been deposited on the page, or for "loading" it as described in Andrew's tutorial and depositing very controlled amounts. Because of the fundamental differences between charcoal and graphite, it's a bit easier to use it with charcoal, but there's nothing "wrong" with using on pencil. You'll just find that graphite is a bit more "stubborn".
Personally, I am a filthy finger-smudger when I work with pencil. If I surmise that an area of the page needs some smooth and even toning, I will push some graphite in and then work additively and subtractively to sculpt more specific form from there. I will also variably add tone via hatching and simply laying down shapes of tone one stroke at a time, which is really just hatching in a tightly controlled way.
both of these are 30 minutes.
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edit: I made a few quick changes before bed. knee and right arm are getting fixed next
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One, I think you should spend more time per piece on some of these. Like a couple hours more. It's good to fire off some short and medium studies when cramming on a new and challenging subject just to get some mileage under your belt and help pick up structural cues, but at some point it's also necessary to pull back and take some quality time with it too. In this case, if you're struggling with rendering and light, then it's doubly important to slow down and make some more careful observations.
As for more specific critique, you need to pay more attention to the overall value relationships rather than just local comparisons. The reason your vintage reference photo has that black background is to set off that rimlight coming in from the left and give us a nice slice of light on her arm and hips. The relationship between this slice of light and the rest of the body is lost in your study-- we're just left with a light on the left and an equal light on the right. They need to be differentiated, because they're different light sources and they have different strengths.
Here's just two really quick and dirty examples. In the first example, I toned the entire image down to simulate if you were working on a medium-toned paper, or if you had prepared your surface with a rubbed-in gray value before you started. With a general medium tone, it's a simple as picking out a white media such as chalk and drawing in those highlights.
When you aren't working on a toned surface, you can only bring the values down obviously. In the second piece I just crudely put in a light wash of gray to tone down the side receiving indirect light, and strictly speaking that could have been enough. I went and added in the dark of the background though because the sense of illumination is far more powerful when you set it off against a dark contrast rather than just letting it merge with the natural tone of the paper. It's the same basic reason that the original photographer put that background up, really.
Thanks a bunch!
edit: actually I lied I'm not going to be up for long since I work so early tomorrow...
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It really helped me out!
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The moth-pocalypse is back and badder than ever in Colorado. It's this bad:
Really, they're just a grouchy bunch.
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Thought I'd put this here too. Want to ink it once I get the rest of everyone included
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Also you drew both my pictures in the sketch a forumer thread. That's two times the me!
So I learned a few valuable things about inking (and other things) today.
1. Micron brush pens are shit because the nib breaks very easily
2. GET HARDER LEAD because the brittle lead fucks up your ink
3. Don't try to erase your pencil for a while because the ink isn't dry
4. WORK LARGER
5. Work OVER what you're drawing not behind it.
6. I have no idea how to ink...
So here's what I'm going to do: Ask for help?
Here's what I got.
Also perspective is very hard.
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Does Loki look like a bitch?
Asgard aint no country I ever heard of, do they speak english in Asgard?
That's it. I've had it with these mother-fuckin demi-gods on this mother-fuckin airship!
Spoilered for excessively lame. IDK WHY but I was compelled to do this one. No spoilers.
and this, I forgot to upload it earlier. Just practicing.
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You'd be surprised how many times I've read through that... and nothing really sticks. I have a set of microns and I just can't seem to make them do what I want, that's why I'm trying brushes/brush pens.
Also @fantomas, it started off as hank, then I drew hank like brock samson. lol
edit: so I broke out the microns and I take it back. The stark and hulk ones turned out pretty well. I want to scan them so they'll have to wait til later.
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Personally, I haven't used non-brushlike inking materials in forever. They can be hard to learn how to control (something I'm definitely still working on) but the flow and line variation from them is top notch
I love tsutomu nihei's really really harsh blacks. He'll load entire pages with black. It's awesome... but he really isn't a good learning example. Dude started as an engineer, lots of detail in everything. Hard to understand
I get lost super easy
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He he, yoda looks like George Lucas
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Got and read Invincible book 1 and Bamman Arkham Asylum. Now I have nothing to read
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Today's movie, Hunt for the Red October. Here are the highlights
a five minute sketch before bed, trying to apply a little of what was suggested earlier about values.
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If you ultimately want to go into brush inking, work on your control with pens and then work up to brushes--maybe taking an intermediary step with a brush pen first and learning back up to proficiency.
Most manga artists use nibs, though. It looks like Nihei uses a combination of nibs and brushes, but nibs are definitely going to get you closer to his look than microns ever will.
That aside, I still say you should stick with the microns you have, working more simply, and thinking about the design of the black and white shapes more than the lineweights. A sense for lineweight comes semi-naturally as you get better at inking.
Thanks for the suggestions, the line weight thing has been a source of confusion but I'll take your suggestion to simplify the lines for now. I
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Trying to find an excuse to draw yesterday...
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Luke is wearing all black, Darth Vader is in a black suit with shiny parts, and the emperor is wearing a black robe in a black chair in a black room.
That's a lot of ink to fuck up on.
I need some guidance, I feel a little out of my depth lol
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So here's the final sketch, some of the extraneous detail will be cropped out when I stencil in the final borders. If at all possible, I am daunted by this to begin inking than before. There's a shit load of black in these. The guy in the right panel, most of the bottom left panel as well. I don't even know where to begin. :C I'm petrified of fucking this up even though I know it doesn't matter.
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Dude. It's getting inked... Do you have some, maybe, advice? On how to do that?
Here's what I got so far working out some trial and error shit digitally before going to paper. I'm going to go get some food now since that took most of the morning. If you have any suggestions on how to do this in all black (for when I do this on paper) I'm all ears.
I suppose I could just go buy some india ink.
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Also, fyi, this is the most visible that I could make the image look by adjusting the brightness and sliders, taken in good lighting.ITS NON PHOTO BLUE PENCIL, IT ISN'T EVEN SUPPOSED TO SHOW UP IN A PHOTO! But I needed some help... The only reason I uploaded it was for advice/tips/help on INKING not advice on how to color correct!
This isn't any easier to look at than the other
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About the inking, wich is also the part I love most about drawing, I will give you advise:
Stop just tracing your pencil, put some heart into it, definitely get china ink, and definitely get a stylus, a very thin brush, a glass of water, and try throwing some mid-tones, try making the lines with a brush, you will see that they look a lot more dynamic and a lot less as if you were just tracing the pencil, that, for anyone that likes to ink, its an eyesore.
Another advice, work on your drawing skills, in my opinion most of these are really not even worth inking, seriously the style is not cutting it, and the humour you use, is as unnapealing as your attitude, so overall, try to improve everything, even the way you communicate with people.
AWESOME critique man. No seriously. I'm going to get to work on that right away.
Like that^
I'M HERE because I'm a bad artist. I posted the shitty photo because I don't know what else to do aside from just tracing my pencil. The point of the comic wasn't to make a joke, wasn't to make anyone laugh, it was to have something to fucking draw because without it I wouldn't have drawn anything that day, but I drew something, drew an environment in a comic for the first time, forced myself to use references, and I drew something for fun, just to keep me in it, so I don't burn out on shit that bores me, and focus instead on enjoying it! That's why I'm inking shitty drawings that "are not even worth inking" because I'm enjoying myself, all the while learning something, trying something to keep drawing.
I could instead be self-deprecating, and announce to the world that my shit sucks, I could say in every post "Oh God, I this drawing sucks goat ass, thanks guys for dealing with my bull shit excuses for art", but nobody wants to help someone who doesn't even appreciate their own work and effort themselves. I got the "work on your attitude" critique from playing open mic, because I would always play terribly in my mind, when in actuality I'm flooring the place because I'm actually not bad at all at guitar, but I'd always end a set saying "man I'm terrible/that sucked/I could do better/I'm having an off night" or what the fuck ever. It was pissing people off, they thought I was being cocky because I played fantastic, but one little fuck up and I get self-conscious. So I'm working on the fucking attitude thing too. The truth is, I fucking hate everything I draw, I know it isn't good, I know that I'm not on par with anyone that posts on this motherfucking forum...
THAT'S WHY I'M HERE. Y'know... to learn from others. To get help.
But you know, it's cool. The "you suck at this game, uninstall life" style of critique is also constructive. And thanks for that.
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And please leave other people alone if you want to flame me in any way, I say enough crap on my own for anyone to have more than sufficient quoting material.
Edit: But really, leaving all smartassery aside, do grab a brush or a traditional stylus, with a flask of china ink, and you will find that inking has huge possibilities.
Edit 2: Ive never used this tags so it MAY not work.
Still, leaving the atrocity of the drawing, this was pretty much what I ment, its the only pic I have of a "process". And yes, I have gone to such lenghts as to dig many archives that were lost just to make a point in an internet argument! thats how busy I am at work today.