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My Sci-Fi Webcomic : Nagori Apocalyptic Heritage (NAH)
clafann1
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I just completed Chapter 1 yesterday.
A story about an artifact found deep on a silver mine. It's origin is unknown but in fact it's an alien artifact left on Earth millions of years ago. A pair of scientists and their young daughter are traveling to the mine to do some research. They're 200km away but their fate is already being written...
Please check the pages below.
A story about an artifact found deep on a silver mine. It's origin is unknown but in fact it's an alien artifact left on Earth millions of years ago. A pair of scientists and their young daughter are traveling to the mine to do some research. They're 200km away but their fate is already being written...
Please check the pages below.
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The forum dynamic in this sub-thread is that people post their art directly into the thread instead of linking it, this way, you will get more critiques. We don't really like when people use our board to drive traffic to their page or gain readership, this is called "site whoring".
If you are looking for critiques on the creative and technical aspect of your comic, this is the place. If you just wanna showcase it, the thread runs the risk of being locked.
I agree and it's a shame because the proper backgrounds that are drawn are (in my opinion) the strongest part of the artwork.
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Backgrounds are definitely the strongest part of the artwork. Keep drawing and practicing (outside of drawing the actual strip). I feel like the later work is rushed? It seems like the people are not as well drawn as they were in the beginning (prior to the explosion that wiped out the town). That being said, let the drawing do the talking. The panels during the explosion where you explained what was happening felt very weird to me. If it was suppose to be someone telling me about it... that didn't come through.
I would also recommend getting someone to read over and edit your script. I'm guessing English isn't your first language which might explain some of the strange phrasing, but a second set of eyes will help with that and also help you make a stronger story. Right now, I don't understand your story.
it never did