Penny Arcade Forums› Artist's Corner
As was foretold, we've added advertisements to the forums! If you have questions, or if you encounter any bugs, please visit this thread: https://forums.penny-arcade.com/discussion/240191/forum-advertisement-faq-and-reports-thread/
Options

clipped.

ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
edited April 2013 in Artist's Corner
clipped.

ManonvonSuperock on

Posts

  • Options
    FANTOMASFANTOMAS Flan ArgentavisRegistered User regular
    With the exception of the tiger, i think they are incredibly creepy, specially the little girl. Sorry I cant be of further assistance.

    Yes, with a quick verbal "boom." You take a man's peko, you deny him his dab, all that is left is to rise up and tear down the walls of Jericho with a ".....not!" -TexiKen
  • Options
    ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited April 2013
    clipped.

    ManonvonSuperock on
  • Options
    MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    I really like your font choice! Very appropriate!

  • Options
    ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited April 2013
    clipped.

    ManonvonSuperock on
  • Options
    NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    Just a non-art suggestion: are you planning on having somebody edit the text, too? Some of the English is a little awkward in places.

  • Options
    ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    Writing's definitely not my forte. Perhaps I should take it to the Writer's Block?

  • Options
    NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    I think that'd be a great idea, yeah. :)

  • Options
    NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    I would cut down on the exposition so soon in the story.

  • Options
    kevindeekevindee Registered User regular
    It's hard to critique this, because I feel the general feeling you get while reading the book is more important than the specific character design or art quality per se. Having said that, I enjoyed the first couple of pages quite a lot, and I think you're off to a good start.

    Do hit up the writer's block for suggestions on the writing aspect. As for the art, I think you could drop the thickness of the outlines a tad, just because I think it might work better with the rendering style and feel more organic.

    TUMBLR.
  • Options
    ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited April 2013
    clipped.

    ManonvonSuperock on
  • Options
    JJandMrOrangeJJandMrOrange Registered User new member
    I love your Art Style. How much time do you spend with 6-7 drawing?

Sign In or Register to comment.
Penny Arcade Forums› Artist's Corner