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MY FUCKING ART YOU SILLY GOOSE FUCK YOU
DOOM2099
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No reason to visit any links or check out the comic strip because every panel is posted right here. This is the whole strip, no need to leave this page or visit any links, ok asshole? Each new panel will be posted here, so there is never any reason to go anywhere, click any links or leave this page for any reason. Will that fix your fucking butthurt?
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1) Shut up.
2) Your art sucks.
Now let me back those statements up, and see if you can shut your face, and check your ego long enough to listen.
1)People like you are NOTHING NEW to this forum. We deal with the likes of you daily/weekly/monthly. Your types come in here without any respect. No respect for the rules, and no respect for the artists here, then act like a petulant child when you don't get people telling you how amazing you and your "art" or "strip" or what ever the fuck you're trying to do is. You got the same smack down that many people (myself included courtesy of Grifter) get when they don't follow the rules. The easy answer is to eat you humble pie, admit you made a mistake, and then come back. This is a VERY excepting community that is always looking for new people to join us, and add content and feedback, but you childish twits can get past the fact you ignored the rules. If you can't even respect that first basic rule, and your post, and thread title is any indication of the person you truly are, then this isn't the place for you, and you can walk your childish ass out the door.
If you opt to be a big boy, then there's a lot this place can teach you, because frankly son, your not nearly as good as you think you are. We aren't your mom, dad, or buddies at school. We're serious artists and people who are striving to be better. Childish spats and general prickish behavior doesn't reside here. So figure out what it is you want to do, and who you want to be, and get back to us. If it's to be a better artist, this is a good place to be.
2)The matter of the suckage of your art. So it looks like you poorly copied straight from a comic book the best you could. Then copied and pasted many panels, jammed as much text as you could into the thing and placed it on-line for people to wonder at. Except it's painfully clear that you don't know dick about anatomy, line weight, value, composition or flow. You have no consistency with panels, some of your stuff is grainy, and none of it is original. I can't speak to the CONTENT because frankly, i didn't read the thing. There is so much damn text, that i'm turned off by it all. Your art isn't working, and your text is working even less. You have no balance in your work and i've blasted out wet farts with more personality than you seem to posses.
You want real feed back?
Can the attitude, change your thread title, and have some god dammed respect for the people here.
Good day to you sir.
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If I was tracing from a comic, wouldn't the art be better?
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The comic's premise really does rely on the godawfulness of the art--It's intended as part of the joke, like a charicature of a lot of benignly terrible-looking golden age comics. I think a skilled writer could definitely find a way to use these drawings to make something funny. I honestly find these drawings to be pretty funny by themselves, for example, this one:
How is that drawing not hilarious?
That said, the writing and presentation don't work. I get the joke, and I accept the viability of the premise, but the jokes are not well-crafted.
Basically, I don't think that this particular comic would necessarily benefit from better drawings. At the same time, I really don't think that the OP is interested in improving or receiving critique on the art, so it doesn't seem like this really belongs in the AC.
then why are you here
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I did use reference though, in the form of a street performer named Sandra in Las Vegas who plays, you guessed it, Minnie Mouse.
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Pretty sure he was referencing this other poorly drawn artwork.
Disagree? Show me the original image. Otherwise, I name you liar. Some more.
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If you would like help with your writing, and I suggest that you do get help, then please post your comics in the Writer's Block.