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  • FANTOMASFANTOMAS Flan ArgentavisRegistered User regular
    With the exception of the tiger, i think they are incredibly creepy, specially the little girl. Sorry I cant be of further assistance.

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  • MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    I really like your font choice! Very appropriate!

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    Just a non-art suggestion: are you planning on having somebody edit the text, too? Some of the English is a little awkward in places.

  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    Writing's definitely not my forte. Perhaps I should take it to the Writer's Block?

  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    I think that'd be a great idea, yeah. :)

  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    I would cut down on the exposition so soon in the story.

  • kevindeekevindee Registered User regular
    It's hard to critique this, because I feel the general feeling you get while reading the book is more important than the specific character design or art quality per se. Having said that, I enjoyed the first couple of pages quite a lot, and I think you're off to a good start.

    Do hit up the writer's block for suggestions on the writing aspect. As for the art, I think you could drop the thickness of the outlines a tad, just because I think it might work better with the rendering style and feel more organic.

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  • JJandMrOrangeJJandMrOrange Registered User
    I love your Art Style. How much time do you spend with 6-7 drawing?

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