Seriously though, webcomic guy, Baldorage. The art is not really that bad, although the lines could be a little cleaner. It's way too big, shrink it down so it fits on a screen without stretching it out (about half the size it is now). The panel layout is too wacky to figure out what order they're supposed to be read in, you'll wanna re-arrange that for sure.
And finally, the 'two guys who like video games' thing has been done to death. Seriously, there are hundreds of them out there, some of them good, most of them not. There don't need to be any more. Find some different subject matter. Comics, toys, cars, politics, anything.
I actually don't really mind how the actual characters are drawn, but the backgrounds are terrible, the panel sequencing is hard to follow, and the joke isn't very funny.
I'm only harsh when someone doesn't follow the Prime Directive - which is to say POST SOME FUCKING ART.
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dude no one is leaving you "tips" because there's so much wrong. but here' you go.
colors- WAY too saturated
layout- awful just awful, and hard to follow
art- not very good
concept- 2 guys talking about video games...have we seen this before?
the joke- (clearly on us) and not funny
lens flare (NO! BAD!)
backgrounds...seem to be some scralled lines.
your art is ok....average to say the least...joke wasn't funny, and the panel design makes it imposisble to tell how I'm supposed to read it.
And the rule is to post pics, not links, so that's why you're getting ragged on. But even so, it's not that great, and in no way is it very original.
@Saved: best comment ever. I watched that episode last night.
@baldorage: No one is taking you seriously because you didn't take the forum seriously. Here, i'll pretend you deserve a real critique.
Your art is terrible awful terrible. It makes me sad and it killed my dog.
Your story/joke doesnt exist. I looked for it. Its not there. Even though I cant tell what order to read the comic in, it doesnt matter. Try this. Go top left, bottom left, top right then straight down. Does it make sense? No. Do you have any idea whats going on at all? No. Now go top left, top right, etc. STILL DOESNT MAKE ANY FUCKING SENSE.
WHO IS THE FUCKING SONY GUY AND WHY DOES HIS HEAD EXPLODE!LOLXOXOXOROFLMAO!!11!!!
No one threw a grenade at anyone. Why are they talking about grenades?
Take WHAT, Sixaxis?! WTF?!
Why is he shaking the wiimote at the exploding head guy? Is that why his head exploded? If I shake my wiimote at your comic, will it explode?
The grungie guy's name is Plagas? Fucking Seriously? A Sith? Is the other guy General Grievous? (POINT REDACTED- I'm a Resident Evil moron)
"DID SOMEBODY SAY PLAYSTATION???!!!!?"
No. No one in your comic says "Playstation" at any time. I dont see what Sony Jack Frost is so worked up about.
Bottom line, this is a god damned train wreck. Stop wasting your time and kill yourself.
Are you fucking kidding me hijinks? i realize this is an amateur job but you're a fucking moron.if you didnt notice in the first line of the comic, its about Resident Evil 4, if you haven't played Resident Evil 4 than you won't understand the joke. the virus in the game is called las plagas.
Are you fucking kidding me hijinks? i realize this is an amateur job but you're a fucking moron.if you didnt notice in the first line of the comic, its about Resident Evil 4, if you haven't played Resident Evil 4 than you won't understand the joke. the virus in the game is called las plagas.
Scratch the "Plagas" remark off the list. How do you explain the rest of it?
I actually don't really mind how the actual characters are drawn, but the backgrounds are terrible, the panel sequencing is hard to follow, and the joke isn't very funny.
So, draw from anatomy books, lols.
I wonder if Ramius can rig up an post auto-reply that if a member has under 10 posts and is making their first thread in the AC with a link, it'll automatically tell them to "Study Anatomy/Draw from Life"
Invite the boss to the movies! His delicate sensibilities are offended by the crude movie choice, but the night is saved when one of the girls take a liking to the boss! It's just another hilarity-packed episode of "The AC!" See it tonight, at 6 Central on the WB!
I actually don't really mind how the actual characters are drawn, but the backgrounds are terrible, the panel sequencing is hard to follow, and the joke isn't very funny.
So, draw from anatomy books, lols.
I wonder if Ramius can rig up an post auto-reply that if a member has under 10 posts and is making their first thread in the AC with a link, it'll automatically tell them to "Study Anatomy/Draw from Life"
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Your comic is bad and you should feel bad.
Clothing?
You have ten points*!
*Only valid in web comic form. Offer expires 08/01/2007
I will draw you a dog juggling on a unicycle for 11 points.
Okay, but it'll come later as the computer with the scanner hooked up is currently occupied.
EDIT: There should at least be SOME art in this thread.
That one's good, but I like this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nQNINsP6c40
Seriously though, webcomic guy, Baldorage. The art is not really that bad, although the lines could be a little cleaner. It's way too big, shrink it down so it fits on a screen without stretching it out (about half the size it is now). The panel layout is too wacky to figure out what order they're supposed to be read in, you'll wanna re-arrange that for sure.
And finally, the 'two guys who like video games' thing has been done to death. Seriously, there are hundreds of them out there, some of them good, most of them not. There don't need to be any more. Find some different subject matter. Comics, toys, cars, politics, anything.
So, draw from anatomy books, lols.
colors- WAY too saturated
layout- awful just awful, and hard to follow
art- not very good
concept- 2 guys talking about video games...have we seen this before?
the joke- (clearly on us) and not funny
lens flare (NO! BAD!)
backgrounds...seem to be some scralled lines.
its just..it's.....it's just not good. i'm sorry.
And the rule is to post pics, not links, so that's why you're getting ragged on. But even so, it's not that great, and in no way is it very original.
Its been toooo long.....
See, Moog and I should start a sitcom.
@baldorage: No one is taking you seriously because you didn't take the forum seriously. Here, i'll pretend you deserve a real critique.
Your art is terrible awful terrible. It makes me sad and it killed my dog.
Your story/joke doesnt exist. I looked for it. Its not there. Even though I cant tell what order to read the comic in, it doesnt matter. Try this. Go top left, bottom left, top right then straight down. Does it make sense? No. Do you have any idea whats going on at all? No. Now go top left, top right, etc. STILL DOESNT MAKE ANY FUCKING SENSE.
WHO IS THE FUCKING SONY GUY AND WHY DOES HIS HEAD EXPLODE!LOLXOXOXOROFLMAO!!11!!!
No one threw a grenade at anyone. Why are they talking about grenades?
Take WHAT, Sixaxis?! WTF?!
Why is he shaking the wiimote at the exploding head guy? Is that why his head exploded? If I shake my wiimote at your comic, will it explode?
The grungie guy's name is Plagas? Fucking Seriously? A Sith? Is the other guy General Grievous? (POINT REDACTED- I'm a Resident Evil moron)
"DID SOMEBODY SAY PLAYSTATION???!!!!?"
No. No one in your comic says "Playstation" at any time. I dont see what Sony Jack Frost is so worked up about.
Bottom line, this is a god damned train wreck. Stop wasting your time and kill yourself.
geek comic
www.hijinksensue.com
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
geek comic
www.hijinksensue.com
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
It's part of AntiTinwoodsman's intro comic to the PA:AC Battle Tournament 2007. That's what Pennywise would look like if I could actually draw well.
So when does not knowing about Resident Evil make one a moron? I think you need to have a Coke and a Smile.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpKQFAkQfnA
"YOU had to drag SPINES into this!"
geek comic
www.hijinksensue.com
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
:^:
geek comic
www.hijinksensue.com
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
That's cool I guess.
ABSOLUTELY!
Gosh, MT, we're supposed to meet the girls at the movies in an hour! But my boss is coming for dinner tonight!
I wonder if Ramius can rig up an post auto-reply that if a member has under 10 posts and is making their first thread in the AC with a link, it'll automatically tell them to "Study Anatomy/Draw from Life"
http://forums.penny-arcade.com/forumdisplay.php?f=23
I would support it.
I just realized that spine can be re-arranged into penis.