I actually laughed.
I think the guy's proportions in the second and third panels look stretched, and maybe it's because they're mostly undefined, but his body looks kind of elongated next to the robot who you can clearly see has his arms well defined with joints and stuff. Maybe he should be scratching his head or something a bit more expressive for the punchline panel.
You don't really need to change anything though, that's just a suggestion.
Maybe even widen out the arms from the elbows. Not to Popeye levels of forearm growth, but enough to make it sort of like a smaller cylinder that connects to a slightly larger, more round edged one.
Failing that, you're spot on as far as defining with folds. Other than that, the robot is super expressive design wise.
Jordan - I like your idea. If I got these screen printed with some metallic inks, I think they could look really cool. I'm just doing print-on-demand right now, so I'll save that for the future.
Mustang - Thanks for the feedback. I'll be sticking with plain black for now.
Yeah, plain black is the right call. Cheapest to print if you're getting them screened, cleanest looking, doesn't emphasize the type over the character. Nice design.
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edit: neat logo nibs!
I think I might take Mustang's advice and make the outlines thinner for future shirts. But my dad liked it.
Secret Santa art for Melting Doll:
Painting for my cousin, first one I've done in about 10 years I think:
Your painting also has an odd charm to it. You should do more.
*hugs*
I like that
I think the guy's proportions in the second and third panels look stretched, and maybe it's because they're mostly undefined, but his body looks kind of elongated next to the robot who you can clearly see has his arms well defined with joints and stuff. Maybe he should be scratching his head or something a bit more expressive for the punchline panel.
You don't really need to change anything though, that's just a suggestion.
Failing that, you're spot on as far as defining with folds. Other than that, the robot is super expressive design wise.
Thoughts?
Just a thought : maybe try some where the logo stays metallic and the rest of the shirt is a different color?
Mustang - Thanks for the feedback. I'll be sticking with plain black for now.
Here's a test shot:
And here are the painted heads: