My first attempt at a comic...Its very rough around the edges.
So I have never posted on a Forum before...ever! always been a bit Forum shy! Weird cos I am definitely not shy!
Anyway, I have just started drawing and cartooning again after a long stint away from my art... and I thought I would share
My first effort with you guys...
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Its very rough...I drew it by hand photographed it and then coloured it in photoshop...(I can't find my tablet :P)
anyway do forgive its shabbyness... I've never really drawn a strip before so any feedback would be ace...
cheers
Seph
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What are you looking for from the forum as a whole? This place typically is for artistic critique and as a place to grow your art abilities, which are you looking for? Do you have other art to post? More comics? Doodles? Drawings of an egg? The more we see of what you can do the better the amazing artists here (not me) can help you.
Main things I'm taking away from this one is that your color pallet is pretty dark and desaturated, which (along with your hash lines) has a sort of "scanned from newspaper" feel to it. That's not necessarily a good or bad thing, depending on if it is intentional. You may also want to save your image files in higher quality to prevent color distortions from becoming a jpeg.
part of that might be that it looks like he/she didn't do any cleanup on the scan, and then used a multiply layer for the lineart, so there's still some grey from the paper coming through. Or maybe coloured using multiply, same effect.
I normally use my Bamboo and work straight in Ps but its awol at the moment...(recent house move). I've been looking at the threads and found some of the tutorial stuff to immerse myself in. I will post more of my work for you guys to look at...see if I can find stuff that ain't so rough...
But at the same time, there are lots of cartoonists that don't have a lot of variation in line thickness, so it's not that huge a deal.