My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
title: "Wow I can't believe I'm talking to Stephen King!" "Yes and as I can't see what letters you chose there I can agree to that with a clean conscience!"
alt text: gotta side with t-rex on this, a world where sunset duplicates all the ghosts caught in it seems PRETTY RAD TO ME. i don't think it's sustainable though. something's gotta give. those ghosts are getting HUNGRY.
e-mail: Jay Deesalinger's Great Big Book of Scary, Spooky, Downright Silly Ghost Tales for Tweens
Ah yes, the infamous scam wherein the conman gives the mark exactly what she promised she would set out to do. oldest trick in the book! can't believe anyone fell for it.
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My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
Start with avoiding all of this stuff again. "Shredded Moose is, along with being irredeemably offensive, devoid of humor or any point behind its misogyny. The artwork is somewhat competent, though an obvious rip-off of Penny Arcade's style and often glaringly unrealistic where female anatomy is concerned. The comic made a poorly executed attempt at Cerebus Syndrome by dealing with a character's past, witnessing her mother being raped. It's honestly difficult to tell whether this story arc was supposed to be funny or not. This, combined with every other comic seeming to be a Filler strip of a nude girl (even in the middle of storylines!), made the comic even less readable toward the end. Mercifully, it seems to have finally died. The domain name expired, and the creators have made no effort to find a new site."
Who here has heard about the marvelous tale of Sonichu
have you checked out webcomic.com??? it's HILARIOUS A++ would read again
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I could never do the Nuzlocke Run. It would hurt me too much. On the inside.
Capital is only the fruit of labor, and could never have existed if Labor had not first existed. Labor is superior to capital, and deserves much the higher consideration. - Lincoln
My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
Leave the industry
He knows what he saying since he makes a web comic that is actually like by the public at large.
My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
well in the spirit of assuming good faith
um
don't draw other webcomic artists as racist caricatures?
in fact maybe don't make your comic a satire of internet metaculture at all
My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
I'll try to give you two honest pointers. First, it is really hard to make good comedy about something you don't genuinely like. Thus, don't make comics about feminism or sexism ever again. Try to make them about something you are passionate about, maybe video games!
Second, there is some very racist and sexist shit going on with the character design. You should seriously re-examine your views on other ethnicities and women.
My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
In the second panel that should be a question mark not an exclamation mark.
Other than that.... nooope can't think of anything good work top notch great job.
My first instinct was to scroll past the comic and feel a bit of pity for the fact that the poor guy would get ripped apart by the thread. Something about it brought my eyes back, and I could not stop looking. There are so many layers of awfulness.
Shredded Moose deserves no pity.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
Start fresh with a new name because Shredded Moose is a cesspit of bigotry and a comedic dead space.
But before you do that rethink your entire life and figure out why you ever thought promoting a sexist, racist, comedically rotting piece of shit webcomic with an art style that is utterly derivative was a good idea.
Then work to change your views so you can become a worthwhile human being that might understand what people who have respect for other humans might find amusing.
Then start anew. And ditch your partner if he doesn't do the same thing. If he's endorsing Shredded Moose in this form, he is just as bad as you.
Or if it's easier just never make another strip. Please.
We're starting Shredded Moose anew and with that, we're totally nix'ing the old formula. Satire often causes a division between what's an honest opinion and what's not. I think I need to improve on making my actual opinion more distinguishable from what I don't believe. I am not someone whose racist and those characters were exaggerated for a comedic effect. Not a harmful one.
What people don't often get is that Brew (the backwards hat dude) is a satirical caricature that is designed to point out the flaws in social trends in an over-the-top manner so obviously he's going to come across as a little cocky. However, do not expect him to be a Rayne Summers, he has and will get his comeuppance when he truly deserves it.
That said, I'm really going to take all of this into account when I write the next comic. If you, Rainfall, Vic, and Dongs all believe that this will truly help me improve, I'll believe you.
That reminds me, it's Halloween. And the fact that I need to be reminded it's Halloween makes me feel old. It doesn't help that people are all too afraid to go Trick or Treating anymore, so I don't even get the joy of scaring the beejebus out of children... Not that I derived joy out of frightening children... I'm not a bad person, honest!
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Anyway you're only allowed to site whore if at least one person in the thread likes your comic, so this should be an open and shut case.
heh
that fuckin' moose
http://www.reddit.com/r/mra
You're probably supposed to be here
please go there & stay there
ty
Who here has heard about the marvelous tale of Sonichu
I don't know since it mention on that page as well.
Well, criticism is what I'm looking for actually, so I appreciate it. I came here for honest criticism because it's my desire to make a webcomic that people will publically accept. I don't need mindless sycophants who kiss my ass and lick my feet, day in and day out, I need constructive criticism to help me improve.
So just tell me this guys. What can I do to make my comic more appealing to you?
title: "Wow I can't believe I'm talking to Stephen King!" "Yes and as I can't see what letters you chose there I can agree to that with a clean conscience!"
alt text: gotta side with t-rex on this, a world where sunset duplicates all the ghosts caught in it seems PRETTY RAD TO ME. i don't think it's sustainable though. something's gotta give. those ghosts are getting HUNGRY.
e-mail: Jay Deesalinger's Great Big Book of Scary, Spooky, Downright Silly Ghost Tales for Tweens
I thought that was D20 and Older.
Start with avoiding all of this stuff again. "Shredded Moose is, along with being irredeemably offensive, devoid of humor or any point behind its misogyny. The artwork is somewhat competent, though an obvious rip-off of Penny Arcade's style and often glaringly unrealistic where female anatomy is concerned. The comic made a poorly executed attempt at Cerebus Syndrome by dealing with a character's past, witnessing her mother being raped. It's honestly difficult to tell whether this story arc was supposed to be funny or not. This, combined with every other comic seeming to be a Filler strip of a nude girl (even in the middle of storylines!), made the comic even less readable toward the end. Mercifully, it seems to have finally died. The domain name expired, and the creators have made no effort to find a new site."
I don't k about u but I would not want to be employed by a concern which regards such a thing as unsafe
I'd assume it is fine since nothing is actually shown.
have you checked out webcomic.com??? it's HILARIOUS A++ would read again
Leave the industry
Nuzlocke runs are for people who need pain to feel alive.
He knows what he saying since he makes a web comic that is actually like by the public at large.
well in the spirit of assuming good faith
um
don't draw other webcomic artists as racist caricatures?
in fact maybe don't make your comic a satire of internet metaculture at all
and don't use a cocky self insert
and don't make it about videogames either
I'll try to give you two honest pointers. First, it is really hard to make good comedy about something you don't genuinely like. Thus, don't make comics about feminism or sexism ever again. Try to make them about something you are passionate about, maybe video games!
Second, there is some very racist and sexist shit going on with the character design. You should seriously re-examine your views on other ethnicities and women.
Chester 5000 XYV is a comic about sex. But also storylines involving capitalists.
Steam // Secret Satan
In the second panel that should be a question mark not an exclamation mark.
Other than that.... nooope can't think of anything good work top notch great job.
I mean, I pretty much knew I was getting into a ketchup water-slugging situation after the one, but, wow
spit
Jess Fink seems like a really cool person.
Steam // Secret Satan
Start fresh with a new name because Shredded Moose is a cesspit of bigotry and a comedic dead space.
But before you do that rethink your entire life and figure out why you ever thought promoting a sexist, racist, comedically rotting piece of shit webcomic with an art style that is utterly derivative was a good idea.
Then work to change your views so you can become a worthwhile human being that might understand what people who have respect for other humans might find amusing.
Then start anew. And ditch your partner if he doesn't do the same thing. If he's endorsing Shredded Moose in this form, he is just as bad as you.
Or if it's easier just never make another strip. Please.
Racist, misogynist, promotion of bro culture. Is the next one gonna be about how we should all read Atlas Shrugged?
-Indiana Solo, runner of blades
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Oh my god, Yahtzee sounds 12 years old
we've hit the peak
nothing will ever surpass the last two pages
What people don't often get is that Brew (the backwards hat dude) is a satirical caricature that is designed to point out the flaws in social trends in an over-the-top manner so obviously he's going to come across as a little cocky. However, do not expect him to be a Rayne Summers, he has and will get his comeuppance when he truly deserves it.
That said, I'm really going to take all of this into account when I write the next comic. If you, Rainfall, Vic, and Dongs all believe that this will truly help me improve, I'll believe you.
anybody post any cool new webcomics
preferably ones that combine racism and sexism in new and exciting ways
-Indiana Solo, runner of blades