- Your job
- Medical appointment
- Get in contact with an acquaintance or friend
- Pick up some food
- Repair something
- Look for a tool or piece of clothing or bed linen
- Post a letter
- Check something online
ah, here is my failure, allow me to make it more public...also, I'd actually like y'all's honest opinion about the text. I didn't write it and wouldn't have put ALL of it on a flyer if it had been up to me...
Not bad, I'd probably try to put more negative space around the edges and add a bit more font size variety though.
Make the date and time the 2nd largest font on the page. Even at a distance they should be able to see name of event, where and when.
*sobs* I know! I wanted to!
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ah, here is my failure, allow me to make it more public...also, I'd actually like y'all's honest opinion about the text. I didn't write it and wouldn't have put ALL of it on a flyer if it had been up to me...
Did they force you to use that font for the copy? I'd go smaller, block track the paragraphs and give it more line spacing to help it breath...or just change the font. Also like winky said, more white space.
Not a whole lot you can do with that much text. I feel your pain.
It's a font that gets used a lot in our diocese, and, I like it it's actually in 14pt which is the smallest the committee chair was okay with (he is an old)...I'd have been really happy to have leeway with the text. As it is I changed a couple of small things that were just...I just couldn't leave 'em alone.
oh god 14 is massive. You could go to 10 and space everything out better, get more white space and make it easier to read (probably). It's not a bad font, its just more of a title/header font than for copy. but like you said...he's an old.
14 isn't massive for a script font like that. For 10 you'd need to change the font to something more Times New Roman ish.
- Your job
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- Get in contact with an acquaintance or friend
- Pick up some food
- Repair something
- Look for a tool or piece of clothing or bed linen
- Post a letter
- Check something online
ah, here is my failure, allow me to make it more public...also, I'd actually like y'all's honest opinion about the text. I didn't write it and wouldn't have put ALL of it on a flyer if it had been up to me...
Did they force you to use that font for the copy? I'd go smaller, block track the paragraphs and give it more line spacing to help it breath...or just change the font. Also like winky said, more white space.
Not a whole lot you can do with that much text. I feel your pain.
It's a font that gets used a lot in our diocese, and, I like it it's actually in 14pt which is the smallest the committee chair was okay with (he is an old)...I'd have been really happy to have leeway with the text. As it is I changed a couple of small things that were just...I just couldn't leave 'em alone.
oh god 14 is massive. You could go to 10 and space everything out better, get more white space and make it easier to read (probably). It's not a bad font, its just more of a title/header font than for copy. but like you said...he's an old.
14 isn't massive for a script font like that. For 10 you'd need to change the font to something more Times New Roman ish.
At 14 its taking up too much real estate without gaining much legibility. 10 might be too far being as scripty as it is, but it definitely could go down.
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Looking after brother's cats during inspection at his place. Big boy cat is a fucking wuss and hiding behind sofa. Little girl kitten doesn't know the meaning of fear and is exploring everywhere. She keeps going to try convince him to come out but he ain't budging.
She has decided this is a good opportunity to eat all the food from both bowls.
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Mortious, how did you get on japan's account
Why not Normal?
yesterday I saw that the first comment on the vimeo video of Clint Eastwood by Gorillaz was that it was a "good song except for the rap"
I'm not sure what's happening to be honest.
It’s not a very important country most of the time
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*sobs* I know! I wanted to!
Remember that we're talking about me here, Cinders
Do you really want even me to move to Normal
14 isn't massive for a script font like that. For 10 you'd need to change the font to something more Times New Roman ish.
is the server insulting your butt?
As diplo would say you need a new booty
maybe i'm streaming terrible dj right now if i am its here
maybe i'm streaming terrible dj right now if i am its here
There are also many penguins and seals nearby, as well as a beach called Murdering Beach
Mascara just on the top lashes? Open up your eyes a bit, but not over do?
Sounded great till the end.
Oh my god it works every time
It's very simple
I'm you now
You have to pick someone else to be
It's um, an interesting error, at the very least!
Thankfully, I am as comfortable about the state of my ass as any overweight white chick can be.
Damnit
I knew it was too good to be true and yet I hoped ..
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We have a vacancy for a Glaswegian, it just opened up
I read the book but haven't seen the movie...is it any good?
Yes, I enjoyed the book.
At 14 its taking up too much real estate without gaining much legibility. 10 might be too far being as scripty as it is, but it definitely could go down.
I love talking about layout stuff! It makes me realize I'm in the right industry.
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nice
you look hot in all that plaster
drink some fanta, faster, Faster!
Arch,
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You require tea, a wood fire, and either someone to snuggle with or a good book
Is it? I grabbed it off a ad-industry blog that has other Coke ads from the era. It's the only one with explicit Nazi imagery though.
She has decided this is a good opportunity to eat all the food from both bowls.