Hi! I'm Blameless Cleric, and... I do art! It happens!
I've been drawing all my life (I am 18, just a babby), but I've never taken any sort of class. I'm currently in my first semester of college, and thinking about getting an art degree. I'd love some constructive criticism - I'm always trying to get better
I've got a kind of cartoony/comic-y style, which is where I like to be, and I know I have a lot of trouble with profiles and composition. I rarely do finished pieces, and almost never do backgrounds or landscapes, so I'll be trying to do more of those and posting 'em here
Here are sketchy sketches
Here are some less... sketchy sketches
This dragon is huge:
And some stuff that's pretty much finished.
Thanks for taking a look
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I can prob give you a few pointers that sprung to mind.
Overall I think the images are a little over-sketchy with the little lines. Be more confident that the lines you're making are the right one. And continue to push the boundaries of line width variation.
I really like the simplicity of the mermaid one, but also the flow of the lines could be a little better. Like I mean that my eyes move from the outstretched hands, down to the tail, and instead of a smooth arcing eclipse type shape, it gets angular in a few spots and keeps the form from flowing a bit. If that makes sense.
Keep at it though, your cartoons are well constructed and have a good amount of potential.
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If you are thinking about being an art major, I suggest thinking pretty critically about what you think you may want to do after school. Spend time building up your technical skills, as they will help you expand your visual knowledge and make your cartooning more robust.
Either way, welcome to the forums!
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I guess part of my problem is that I'm really not sure what questions to ask, but if anything comes to mind, I'll totally poke you
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If I could do comics, that would be fantastic. I'd probably enjoy that more than just about anything else. And one would definitely have to be a soulless cyborg to dislike Kate Beaton.
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More doodles!
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I will say, if you think you want to start making comics, just start making them. Even if they are just one page affairs, dont wait.
All that stuff is from Manga Studio 5, which I juuuuuuust started working with! The stabilizer isn't as good as the one in Sai, but Sai is kind of a baby program in that you cannot do text with it and MS5 is specifically for comics so I am makin' the switch
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Ooh looks cool!
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I'd love it if you took a look at my art and my PATREON!
I'd love it if you took a look at my art and my PATREON!