For those of you who are wondering why am I posting such a similiar mesh after so many months: I lost the original and had to rebuild it. I also hope I made it look a bit better.
I like that Mayday, the only thing that scares me is his ability to turn his eye completely sideways in his socket (in the profile shot). That looks like it might be uncomfortable.
Hehe you haven't offended me (why would you have?). I definitely see what you are saying about the finger. The boob i am less sure about ... but will definitely try out your version. Also your version looks much cuter than mine which is frustrating!
Thanks for helping
actually lilly the problem with the boobs isn't the shape. her left one is just too far to the back of her rib cage. Her back extends too far back and the shoulder isn't really attached right.
The back extending too far back (heh) is also what makes the hips look too narrow.
I also think her left eye is pushed a little to far back on her face which skews the head. the problem being the left side of her face (eye, eyebrow, mouth and ear) doesn't match the perspective and shape you've got going on her right side.
It's hard to explain. I can do a draw over of what I mean if its not clear.
a drawover would be most helpful, if you have the time. < 3
Lly, there is a ton of space in between her eyes that looks weird, and the lighting on her face is pretty inconsistant (unless she is supposed to be cow speckled in skin tone)
Lly, there is a ton of space in between her eyes that looks weird, and the lighting on her face is pretty inconsistant (unless she is supposed to be cow speckled in skin tone)
I think it's supposed to be camouflage body paint.
Lly, there is a ton of space in between her eyes that looks weird, and the lighting on her face is pretty inconsistant (unless she is supposed to be cow speckled in skin tone)
noted.
I have real trouble doing cel style shading so i thought i would try it again. Guess i need to rethink it.
Lly: I did a draw over of what I thought would help. Mainly I realigned the shoulder, moved the breast, straightened out the waist, changed the curve on the hips, changed the jawline, curved the top of the forehead and moved the eye.
These were the kinds of things that jumped out at me. You're drawing is still pretty decent, it just took some small tweaks, and I'm no wakka or bacon or anything so take these as you will.
Since my thread's just being bumped down, perhaps the doodle thread will save me:
Okay, so my school's Mu Alpha Theta (Math Club) fell short of t-shirt design submissions this year, so they wanted me to do one. Only thing is, they gave me a really shitty time frame- so now I have to submit it tomorrow.
I've got to work on a school newspaper comic as well, so I might only be able to do quick fixes, but anything will help. Oh, and please excuse my inability to come up with anything near a decent motto (they can modify that anyway).
Well, I've got to email it to them in about 20 minutes, so it looks like you're the only feedback I got, Frank. Thanksamillion, man. Now I can be confident in the inking.
The viosaber was just a picture that I took. I didn't feel that it belonged in the photo thread, partly because I changed so much of it in the Gimp. I don't want it to look like I slapped a filter on it, which I didn't. Also I just like lightsabers and I play the violin.
If a photo doesn't belong here I'll take care if it asap.
Omg, the thought that the caterpillar looks pretty much phallus-like snook into my brain ;_;
The squid thing looks awesome. I'm especially impressed by the colours ^^!
The viosaber was just a picture that I took. I didn't feel that it belonged in the photo thread, partly because I changed so much of it in the Gimp. I don't want it to look like I slapped a filter on it, which I didn't. Also I just like lightsabers and I play the violin.
If a photo doesn't belong here I'll take care if it asap.
photo's are fine. I just couldn't figure what was going on in that picture that 'sall.
The doodle thread is for fucking around so there's no reason you shouldn't post it here.
Mayday, the heshen (?) fabric looks damn good but it seems as though we can only see the closest layer, and not the other through the holes in it (the normals aren't facing us). Nice renders.
Angel_of_bacon, I really enjoy that piece. Expressive and well balanced stance plus believable and interesting armor, great stuff as usual :^:
Anyways, I spent only 10 minutes on the girl on the right, 30 on the girl on the left. The thing around her neck is supposed to be a necklace but it doesn't really look like one.
Crits welcome as always....
Greatnation: I like it, but her eyes seem too high up and it doesn't look like planned out the legs, the skirt becomes very flat in my eyes.
Bacon: Goddammit, I wish you'd post more 2d doodles.
Omg, the thought that the caterpillar looks pretty much phallus-like snook into my brain ;_;
The squid thing looks awesome. I'm especially impressed by the colours ^^!
you need to check out more of buck's stuff.
theres more than just penisheads.
in regards to the actual drawing: Rad.
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It looks to me like the top right of his head is bulged out. Unless it's meant to be that way. :oops:
For those of you who are wondering why am I posting such a similiar mesh after so many months: I lost the original and had to rebuild it. I also hope I made it look a bit better.
a drawover would be most helpful, if you have the time. < 3
The lines weren't done by me. I'm just colouring them as a fan service to earthworm! So shh. his lines are great!
I think it's supposed to be camouflage body paint.
noted.
I have real trouble doing cel style shading so i thought i would try it again. Guess i need to rethink it.
WIP on self-portrait for CA.org. You guys should check it out: Set a Record
Crits, please.
I think the nose is too... thin? Ah! And the line under the nose (between the holes) shouldn't be there, since we're looking at it from below.
Post updates on it plz!
These were the kinds of things that jumped out at me. You're drawing is still pretty decent, it just took some small tweaks, and I'm no wakka or bacon or anything so take these as you will.
Okay, so my school's Mu Alpha Theta (Math Club) fell short of t-shirt design submissions this year, so they wanted me to do one. Only thing is, they gave me a really shitty time frame- so now I have to submit it tomorrow.
I've got to work on a school newspaper comic as well, so I might only be able to do quick fixes, but anything will help. Oh, and please excuse my inability to come up with anything near a decent motto (they can modify that anyway).
Sorry I'm no help!
Progress on another design project. Using text as the general basis of the image.
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Anywho. An in-class sketch. Some sort of hip grim, i guess.
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Anyhow. Self portrait.
And yeah, mr fahrenheit what is it?
Edit> Bah, Golem
Steam handle: Buckwolfe
:^: :^:
Steam handle: Buckwolfe
If a photo doesn't belong here I'll take care if it asap.
The squid thing looks awesome. I'm especially impressed by the colours ^^!
- great animation focused website http://www.catsuka.com
photo's are fine. I just couldn't figure what was going on in that picture that 'sall.
The doodle thread is for fucking around so there's no reason you shouldn't post it here.
Coal for my fire of imagination o_o
- great animation focused website http://www.catsuka.com
Angel_of_bacon, I really enjoy that piece. Expressive and well balanced stance plus believable and interesting armor, great stuff as usual :^:
Anyways, I spent only 10 minutes on the girl on the right, 30 on the girl on the left. The thing around her neck is supposed to be a necklace but it doesn't really look like one.
Crits welcome as always....
Greatnation: I like it, but her eyes seem too high up and it doesn't look like planned out the legs, the skirt becomes very flat in my eyes.
Bacon: Goddammit, I wish you'd post more 2d doodles.
you need to check out more of buck's stuff.
theres more than just penisheads.
in regards to the actual drawing: Rad.
But Buckwolfe seems to tend to not finish lots of stuff, like me, unfortunately ^^'
- great animation focused website http://www.catsuka.com
just playing around in painter..
edit - NOW WITH COLOUR UNH UNH
edit - fixed head?