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Locust: McGibs Remakes an Old Comic!

McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
edited September 2017 in Artist's Corner
Hey friends (I'm back for my sporradic dip into the AC!)!
A long long time ago, I was making a comic called Locust and the art community here was a great sounding board for me. Locust was full of dumb highschool-isms and anime tropes (I started it when I was 16), and I really didn't have any coherent plan for the greater storyline or structure. I kept it going for a while into college, but eventually outgrew it and decided to move on to other things (like making video games).
Now, almost 10 years later, my partner and I have decided to try and take another crack at Locust. She thought there was some interesting things with a few of the characters and world-building elements and somehow convinced me into rebooting it as a whole new project. Together we've been script writing, tinkering with concept art and are ready to start showing off some of the early designs and ideas.

So here we go!
Locust is a sci-fi story about a couple people trying to rebuild themselves from their troubled pasts, while trying to survive an equally troubling future. It's got music, rebellion, romance, political intrigue, and lasers!
The story takes place in the city of Akara, an ancient city from a long-lost empire. In the time before the comic, Akara was revitalized by entrepreneuring Syndicates who became rich and powerful from the ruin's advanced technologies. Recently, the Syndicates have been dethroned by the fanatical Catharians, outsiders who claim to be the rightful descendants of Akara's creators, and inheritors of it's treasures. Currently Akara is in a precarious state, as the newly "liberated" population has no interest in trading one dictatorship for another.
Aesthetically, we wanted to model Akara on a sort of "cyberpunk Babylon". It's a desert oasis city, lush with green gardens, and towering with ancient architecture from an advanced civilization. It's also a reclaimed city, blasted apart and rebuilt by countless people; crumbling statues defaced with corporate signage and ziggurates bristling with parasitic favelas.
This was a test building I did to try out some styles and technical processes. I made a quick 3d mockup in sketchup and used that as a base for the drawing. The majority of the environments in the comic will be constructed this way to save my sanity.
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And I've got character pinups for most of the cast, minus a few of the lesser antagonists.
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Gabe: A lonely wanderer with a mysterious past. Gabe is a Ferox , a race of nomadic desert warriors, but all he wants to do is make some new friends and eat some tasty food. He picked a bad time to visit Akara.
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Lexi:
A synthetically engineered person, Lexi was tailor made to be a musician and performer for the Syndicates. Although she freed from her previous life by her master's downfall, new problems arise with the rising conflict with the Catharians. All she wants is to get out of Akara and finally see the world, but she's got responsibilities to uphold.
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Cricket:
Lexi's secret stage persona, Cricket is an energetic icon for the rebellion against the Catharians. She's the rallying symbol of the Locust.
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Tory: The cunning leader of the Locust rebellion and proprietor of their underground base at the Red Moon theater. Tory has plans for a reborn Akara, free from the tyranny of the Syndicates and the Catharians, and she'll go to any lengths to get it.
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Kit: Tory's partner in crime, Kit is the chieftain of a Ferox mercenary company bringing the fight to the Catharians. With Akara freed, maybe his people can finally stop wandering the deserts.
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Ben: A Catharian native to Akara (not those new wackjobs who took over the city!), Ben works as a blue collar stagehand at the Red Moon theater. Nothing's ever gone right for poor Ben, and the constant upheaval of Akara only makes him more cynical. Maybe the Catharians have the right idea after all?
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Erin: The last in line of her merchant family's shop, the new governance of the Catharians have been hell on business. Erin's a huge fan of Cricket's music, Lexi's childhood friend, and thinks that maybe the Locust actually can make for a better Akara after all.
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Roy: Erin's brother who works as a bartender at the Red Moon theater, Roy's in way over his head with all this crazy rebellion stuff. His friend Ben is getting more dower than usual, and maybe it's time to hightail it outta town before things get real bad.
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Peregrine Auric: A veteran Catharian knight, Auric's only goal is to hunt his people's arch-nemesis, the Ferox. He's arrives in Akara to track down Kit and his clan, but his single minded tactics only make things worse for everybody.
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Director Pollus: The beleaguered bureaucrat tasked with overseeing the Catharian occupation of Akara, Pollus is underfunded, undermanned, and underappreciated. He desperately tries to maintain control as the fires of rebellion ignite and even his own allies turn against him.
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Blast from the Past!
Here' the original character lineup from way back in the day. With my partner's help, the fashion got way better...
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Left to right: Gabe, Lexi, Erin, Roy, Ben

Finally, here's a few more pieces and sketches while trying out some designs and inking/colouring styles.
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Thanks for checking it out! I'd love to hear any feedback or suggestions, as well as answer any questions I can.
I'll try to keep this thread alive with regular updates, hopefully something every day or two.

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  • IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator mod
    I personally feel like you could have more fun with the clothes. It feels like you have pretty normally-dressed folk mixed in with your cyber-tribe nomads. I feel like I'd appreciate some desert influences and playful touches on all the clothes, because there's nothing grounding them in the fairly american/european styles you have going there (unless there's something I'm misunderstanding about the plot).

    Perhaps its just your style preference, but it feels to me like you went heavy with designing the people who were more unique to the world, but stopped short on the people that seemed "normal". If its not an intentional choice, I'd encourage you to keep world building in that area.

    Otherwise, the drawings themselves look fuckin solid dude. I'm excited to have you posting again, and also to see these characters again. Its a real nostalgia trip for me, I'm glad Gabe is going to get the chance to really be somebody.

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    edited July 2017
    Thanks 'Ruka, that's been something we've been struggling with a bit. Clothing design is not my strong suit, so I've been pretty conservative to sticking to my references. Ben and Erin are the worst offenders with their stock standard jeans and jackets, so we'll try to get together a more unified fashion language for the "normal" Akarans. We've tried to stay away from the usual desert type clothing (baggy/flowing) partly because
    A: that's more the Ferox's thang,
    B: It's a pain in the ass to draw,
    C: The Akarans are sort of intended to clash with the design of Akara itself (the ancient Babylonian part), as they're the more contemporary folk that moved in after it was abandoned.
    We do want to try out some more unusual styles of clothing (Korean's have some cool stuff, that's what Gabe's based on) with more out-there cuffs and cuts. And also more unified use of accessories: jewelry, scarves, sashes, bangles, etc, that will hopefully tie them together a bit more and away from modern looking people.

    I also added in Director Pollus to the OP ^
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  • SadgasmSadgasm Deluded doodler A cold placeRegistered User regular
    Okay, this is really just a personal preference of mine, but it feels to me like the sketches look a lot better than the finished colored art. Just saying, the pencils and ink look more personal to me, while the finished stuff looks rather generic. There's a lot of sharp lines and personality to the sketches and ink, but the colors are just... there. Stuff I've seen a dozen times before.

  • IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator mod
    I think the clarity lends itself to comic pages more, so I dont really mind it. Sketches are energetic, but they can quickly get unwieldy when you need to read a whole layout.

    For the clothes, I wouldnt say go diving into robes and such, but there's plenty of fashion that skates along those lines with different form factors.





    If you can manage to say a substantial amount with the clothing and really invent a language for it, It'll lend a visual interest to the characters. I would dive into cultures that deal with the climate you imagine, and then stylize from there. Even just looking at different regions of the country. When I moved from the northeast to the west, we traded nice, classy coats with heavy collars for shorts, leather boots, and light layers. Just something to think about.

  • bombardierbombardier Moderator mod
    I was just flipping through the print of Locust a couple weeks ago!

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  • KochikensKochikens Registered User regular
    Looks really cool!! I see what Iruka is saying though.. Even the dudes, they all have Very Distinct Collars and just Pants. You could mix it up a bit, throw some boat-necks in there, some less strong-collars that are drapery, sweaters, some shorts. Lexi, Kit and Cricket are by far the most interesting looking designs. Tori, Erin and Ben especially are sort of boring, esp compared to like, Kit, even palette wise. Even if they're meant to come from a place thats more sort of boring-conventional dressed, you could still make looking at them more fun.


    Also for some reason I am not at all a fan of pink-shirt biege vest, it just seems really trying way too hard to make him look... I dunno. It seems like a drawing of someone 'stylish' rather than what a stylish person would actually wear?? Esp if you're going for more interesting korean mens fashion

    love it tho!! cyberpunk Babylon is a cool thing!

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    edited July 2017
    Thanks for the feedback you guys! Made a couple revisions today for Ben and Erin to step away from the contemporary clothing.
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    I'll tweak up Roy and Tory a bit later.

    @Sadgasm more lively sketches I find are always going to be a thing (with almost any art, really), but like Iruka said, its not something that lends itself that well to the sort of comic production I'm aiming for. It's not something I'll be able to keep consistent. This graphic inked/celshaded style might not be the flashiest of arts, it could always be more energetic or detailed or stylized, but I think it will work for me as a production style for however many hundred pages so I can stay sane.

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  • IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator mod
    Nice! Those have way more character to them, love it.

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  • KochikensKochikens Registered User regular
    I especially like Ben a lot more!

    I try to think of it like, would I draw fanart of this character? And that scarf+vest combo + his face being cool seem cool

  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    Pulling some things out of my sketchbook. These are all from before the character plates, so excuse some of the clothing choices.
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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    Some more sketches: Ferox Jetbikes, Catharian vehicles and armour, and some civilian clothings.
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  • FlayFlay Registered User regular
    Giiiiibs!

    Glad to have you back man, I'm jealous of how quickly you work. Looking forward to seeing more of the comic

  • m3nacem3nace Registered User regular
    edited July 2017
    Oh man, my doob. Looking forward to seeing some pages from this (partly cus then I'll have more stuff to say, heh). What kind of layouts are you considering? And how long is this going to be? Is it an epic tale, or maybe a book's length worth?
    For now though, this stuff looks real dope! Especially the sketches, I'd have to agree with sadgasm in that I prefer the life of the sketches. For sure there's no way to keep that sketchy quality intact without getting a bit chaotic at times on the real page, but I'd still like to encourage you to ink it by hand, since those lines have so much more life in them (to me at least.) Clarity is only so much, if you can tackle clarity while doing it by hand that's a whole 'nother level.
    Either way, looks cool and I'm eagerly awaiting more.

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    Thanks guys!
    @M3nace: We're just rounding off the final revision passes of the full script which is about 125 pages (just raw script dialogue/descriptions, not page layout), so... maybe 300-400 pages or so of actual comic? We might break that down into 2 or 3 books depending on what we end up doing for publishing. Right now our goal is to make enough of the comic, put it online, get a community going, and then try to get some publishing/distribution once the project is nearing completion. It'll be a 4 or 5 year project for sure, and we've already got a zillion spinoff/sequal/shortstory ideas that may or may not turn into anything.
    I know for a fact, I'll not be inking this thing by hand, I feel like not having access to digital tools in the drawing phase would destroy me, dispite how it may look. I've yet to do any full test pages yet, but I think the character plates are probobly a little cleaner than the final product will end up looking. Hopefully I'll loosen up when I have to put a 50 person crowd into a panel.

    Speaking of character plates, here's another baddie (though they're not nearly as evil as they look?): Minister Delance, who works alongside Pollus in his administration.
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    Really sifting through minor named characters now.

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    edited July 2017
    Weekend art: Tarxin and Vox, a couple of Ferox dragoons. Sussing out some more Ferox battlegear (as opposed to their civilian gear, like Kit is wearing.)
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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator mod
    Hey Gibs! I was wondering if this reboot is intended to be lighter in tone than the original?
    The new designs are really cool, but I wonder if the bright colors/very clean style/mildly cartoonish aspects of them may clash tonally with the sort of grim, ultra-violent action scenes you had in there originally.

    Granted, right now you're presenting all these characters just hanging out in sunny weather for the sake of working on the character designs- but as long as you are doing exploratory groundwork, it might be worth doing some exploratory work on how you're going to play with light/color toning/cinematography/etc. to hit all the tonal beats you need to hit.

    If you've seen some of the "Art Of" books of Pixar movies, you're probably familiar with the idea of a 'color script'- while I don't think you need to go that far (since you don't have to keep 100 artists on the same page, just yourself), 3-4 demonstration panels plucked out from different points of your script that have different moods (tender scene, violent action scene, I've-just-come-to-the-new-city-and-it's-a-world-of-possibilities scene, etc.) may be helpful in making sure you've got a solid idea of how to handle the whole of the emotional range your story is going to hit, in terms of color/composition/design.

    m3nace
  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    Good idea, I'll definitely try to do some mood scenes from various points in the script.
    Tonally, the comic's outgrown some of it's teenaged angst and violence for the sake of violence where I was just trying to be edgy. They'rl still be gunfights and angry mobs and probably some sexytimes, but on a whole I wouldn't put it in the "grim ultraviolent" category anymore. There should be some levity to contrast with it.

    I did a super choppy doodle tonight, playing around with some rough pen brushes and just trying to be loose. Bout an hour.
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  • ProspicienceProspicience The Raven King DenvemoloradoRegistered User regular
    Really enjoy seeing where you're going with this McGibs. I fondly remember binging on Locust back in my early AC days, really excited about the direction you seem to be headed with it now.

  • NappuccinoNappuccino Registered User regular
    I loved Locust back in the day, and was always mildly bummed when you left it for other greener pastures---glad to see you couldn't get too far away from the work :)

    Like Bacon, I noticed the change in tone. I'm excited to see where how the shifts in tone will impact the story. Part of the original's appeal was definitely the dystopian world you'd created, but handled well, those tones are gonna hit harder if there is some levity.

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    We've been revising scripts for a few weeks, but I'm getting back to some character art!
    I did one of those "25 essential expression challenge" sheets for Gabe. Some of these expressions seem redunant or not "essential", so I'll probobly tweak it some more for future characters.
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  • IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator mod
    Nice!! I'm tempted to suggest pushing them more, but I think that comes from me looking for that instant read for animation. I will say that the folds around the mouth and nose are super important. Disgust, for instance, is a really great one to add a bit of crinkle to the nostril and the lines from there to the mouth. You also get some dimple action when you frown super hard, which can help push things like "frowning" to "sad" to "inconsolable"

    Finding the economical balance of mark making that fits with your style maybe difficult, but I've never looked at something that it suffered from the expressions being well described.

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    I think I'm pretty happy with the level of... "emote" abstraction with these. I guess a lot of them are more subtle because there's multiple levels of a singular expression on the sheet (angry > fierce > rage)
    For disgust, I was thinking more "contempt", but good call on the nose/mouth pulls.
    I think I tried to do that a bit more with Lexi. She's got a squishier face.
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  • LegacyGameLegacyGame Registered User regular
    you got good taste dude

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  • SeveredHeadSeveredHead Registered User regular
    McGibs wrote: »
    Good idea, I'll definitely try to do some mood scenes from various points in the script.
    Tonally, the comic's outgrown some of it's teenaged angst and violence for the sake of violence where I was just trying to be edgy. They'rl still be gunfights and angry mobs and probably some sexytimes, but on a whole I wouldn't put it in the "grim ultraviolent" category anymore. There should be some levity to contrast with it.
    a few spaced out murders are more impactful then non-stop action, for sure. but pls we need them murders

    Brolo
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