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Shayla smiled grimly as she heard someone distinctly calling her name. She pulled gloves over her hands, wincing slightly as they pulled at the bandages. She continued to walk for a few more blocks to let hersef calm down. Then she went into Cafe Moshi.
After going through the door, she stepped to the side to put on her apron and tie her long black hair into a high ponytail.
"Shelby! I'm here!" She yelled quietly, not wanting to upset the customers. Shelby looked back and walked towards her, dusting flour off her hands as she went.
"Your late again...what happened this time?" She asked noticing her glove covered hands. "Did somebody see them? Who was it?
"It was Jesse..." Shayla trailed off uncertainly at the look of delight on Shelby's face.