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3D Fruit Fucker

PA_JayPA_Jay Registered User new member
edited April 2008 in Artist's Corner
Hey everyone,

I made this a little while back for an intro to 3D modeling class. It's the Fruit Fucker having his way with an orange.

!*****NSFW*****!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mWLOhX_ssqo
!*****NSFW*****!

I'm not that great at the whole 3D modeling thing but I thought someone over here might enjoy it.

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    TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    What you want to do right here is put NSFW somewhere.

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    PA_JayPA_Jay Registered User new member
    edited April 2008
    Terribly sorry about forgetting that. I included a pretty huge warning and readme when I sent it to my teacher, seems it slipped my mind this time. Sorry.

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    MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    I was fearful that this piece would involve humping alone, however those fears were allayed by manner of pulp ejection. Most amusing.
    However one would be interested to read the 'huge warning and readme' sent to your teacher, purely from a standpoint of embarassment (on your part) and ensuing hillarity (on ours).

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    CyberMonkeytron3000CyberMonkeytron3000 Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    I can't really comment due to my lack of fruit f**king experience... but I would imagine it would be more of a penetrating action, you know- deeper hip thrusts, really sink deep into the pulp- rather than the scrapping one he seems to be doing in your video.. I don't see how that would get the job done personally.
    Then again I could be completely wrong.

    I also find his reflectivity to be rather distracting.

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    bwaniebwanie Posting into the void Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    that's nice!

    love the reflections but the orange and the penetrationanimation could use some work

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    ZeromusZeromus Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    He needs to be digging into that luscious piece of produce rather than brushing against it lightly.

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    EnkiEnki Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    Agreed. Also, there doesn't seem to be an entry point on the orange, rather the fruit fucker animation just moving through the orange, so perhaps more of a thrusting motion as suggested.

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    srsizzysrsizzy Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    I agree on the point of penetration and the distraction that the reflection causes. Also, I think it could use some sort of background, something to set the mood.

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    LlyLly Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    As a modelling excercise it's pretty weak to be honest. The whole thing is almost entirely made of primitives. Even the arms have a weird kink in them. Then again I have no idea how much you've done in the past so if you're just starting out then it is ok i guess.

    I'm a jaded ex 3D modeller though, so take my words with a pinch of salt.

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    RyvenZRyvenZ Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    Wow, been forever since I've posted...

    I would suggest, maybe a brushed aluminum look for FF's surface. The penetration that had been brought up already... CMT put it quite well. One would expect a ravaged spot on the orange's surface.

    If you really wanted to get disturbing you could include sound effects, heh.

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    The Golden WhoreThe Golden Whore Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    horsqcshscchqorchsh


    And the others are right. Penetration is needed.

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