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Revliss
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hi i am a n00b here (but not a real noob in drawing) most of my drawing are hightly manga stlyed and lots are chicks.
here some of my drawing (will post more soon)
here some of my drawing (will post more soon)
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I'll have more specific comments in a few hours after I get to work.
Welcome to the boards.
Very solid work though, interesting, good design (being anime based), and your anatomy is fairly good
That aside, it's a good start. Keep it up.
The second one refuses to load for me.
Liking the third one a lot. Face seems a little low on the head or a bit small, she seems to have a massive forehead.
Fourth one has some weird things going on with the arms, it's like she's some kind of arachnid hybrid because they look really long and different lengths, and the far arm is going nowhere by the looks of things. The way the head connects to the neck looks off. You need to do something about the clothes, they need some more definition of their edges or some line variation or something because at the moment it comes off rather visually confusing. The legs look twisted and dislocated, I can almost feel the crunch of her knee and ankle twisting around. The perspective on the heel of the shoe looks a little off, and make sure the whole foot fits into them. The height of the high heels looks a little bit absurd, but then again I might just be out of touch with the world of ladies shoe fashion.
The last one has similar problems with the leg, it also doesn't really have any pelvis, the torso just kinda melds with the legs. It has a rather long torso as well. In fact they all have longish torsos except the third one (and possibly the second one, I can't comment on that one since I can't see it. The whole neck/shoulders area looks kinda off as well. Armour looks good, if a little inconsistant in design (but this could well be intentional).
Keep it up, practice more anatomy.
edit- NOW the second one loads! That one looks pretty good, neck looks to be sloping at a strange angle, shield seems wonky (probably just lack of details that would help define the shape and perspective of it though) The feet give the appearance that she's levitating at a slight angle rather than just standing up.
now my proplem in drawing not realy at the anatomy part but it just that i can't draw in good pose with out good ref image so all my drawing are static..
here 2 more drawing last one ME :P
yes i a warhammer fan boy
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
here some of the old drawing that don't look that bad :P
my Black guard
same black guard after she got put to shame now she a kamikazy chick or if i can fine a better name
dark eldar
need i say more
me realy that me
an eldar
ok i done posting pic
Nothing too big to fix, just try to remember that women generally stay in the 6-6 1/2 range for the most part.
Really do like the detail put into these.
but this stuff is pretty cool. :^:
At all, really nice, feminine characters :^: Like the details also a lot and the feets, awesome feets ^^
- great animation focused website http://www.catsuka.com
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/1618/blackguardaftercrisis5mh.jpg <--- The proportions and line quality is bad on this one, and it looks like you didn't work as hard as on some of the others. Maybe it's older.
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/310/darkeldar4mh.jpg <--- The legs and arms are too long and thin...it's probably on purpose, but it doesn't look good.
You have good line quality in a lot of them, and figure. Really good eye for detail. There's just errors in some of them. And, yeah, your biggest problem is faces, and it's bad enough in some of them that it'd be better to just cut the heads off.
anti armor sniper rifle .97 cal depleted uranium tip with explosix core
But anyhow, I really like your drawing styles, but perhaps you could add in backgrounds too? Or maybe colour them in, I'm no artist, but I really like what I see so far.
Head's also too small on the first one. The shoulder that's visible doesn't look like it's connected right. The cleavage looks very porn-star-esque. Faces still seem pretty flat and and lacking detail. Good job with all the clothing, though.
BOTP:
torso is too thin, the neck is too close to the near shoulder, she appears to have no ribcage (specifically the back of it). Boobs are also very much too high, even with her pushup bra amour i think.
legs and arms are good though, keep up the good work!
ps went looking at robot do not get too close to robot mouth super adamantium safety lock make brake some time.
Looks sweet. Evangelion inspired?
"X-Box had me at Halo"
Maybe if by "inspired" you mean "directly ripped from Evangelion".
I mean, there are some obvious differences, but...
http://www.wallpapers-manga.com/images/evangelion/shinji.jpg
looks like a cross between that and one of the face choices for HUcasts from PSO1&2
either way it looks nice
a lots of work need do be done i am adding wings, more heavy modifie to the body i am only keeping the head.
Keep up the good work.
is the goth chick i posted :P