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Wiki- "Common instruments include graphite pencils, pen and ink, inked brushes, wax color pencils, crayons, charcoals, chalk, pastels, markers, stylus, or various metals like silverpoint. An artist who practices or works in drawing may be referred to as a draftsman or draughtsman."
RadioKillerbringer of death to antiquated technologya methlab in MORegistered Userregular
edited February 2009
your face work and your humans are way above par. Very nice detail and structure. ~nod nod~ Some of them could use a little more action to them, but I guess that's just me.
Your background or foliage drawing could use a little more work. They look like some shading is missing.
I DO LOVE your creatures! So far I've seen nothing but great things. Whoo!
Radiokiller: Thanks! I am deathly frightened of action poses because my sense of proportion and form seems to go out the window when I do them. I'll note this as something to practice when I have time.
Urantia(my best internet friend- I told everyone): Noted. I'm not sure what I'm going to have Annarchy doing hanging off the branch. I wanted to throw Twisp and Catsby in there riding in their hot air balloon too, but I think that might throw off the composition. Advice?
hmm, Iunno about ol' Twisp and Catsby, compositions tend to favor an odd number of emphasis points, and I can't see a place to add them without forcing some odd symmetry. But you're a smarty, best friend! So I'm sure you can figure something out. (And oh yeah, like anyone's gonna give a crap about that when it's our favorite comic characters in a fan art.)
About the creature- I love it! Hentai version now.
FlatEricLeaves from the vine, Falling so slowLike fragile, tiny shells, Drifting in the foamRegistered Userregular
edited February 2009
First, let me say that I am by no stretch of the imagination an artist. But I think if you were to take the branch Annarchy is hanging on and make it longer, therefore having her hang down more directly above Gabe, then that would open up enough extra space between Tycho and Annarchy to put the Twisp and Catsby balloon in the background.
It may not even be necessary to move Annarchy. If you make the balloon at the same depth as the hill ridge there that is farthest back, you could probably get away with placing it horizontally just a little to the right of the middle between Tycho and Annarchy, and vertically about right where Annarchy's left hand is.
Anyway, that's just my .02 of course. The composition looks fantastic as it is.
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Hey Allan
I want you to know that I read your comic
and I really like it
I want you to know
that I really like
you
thanks.
Now take my admiration with gusto.
what sort? white or red?
tweaking will continue
Your background or foliage drawing could use a little more work. They look like some shading is missing.
I DO LOVE your creatures! So far I've seen nothing but great things. Whoo!
Urantia(my best internet friend- I told everyone): Noted. I'm not sure what I'm going to have Annarchy doing hanging off the branch. I wanted to throw Twisp and Catsby in there riding in their hot air balloon too, but I think that might throw off the composition. Advice?
About the creature- I love it! Hentai version now.
Thanks, B(I)FF!
It may not even be necessary to move Annarchy. If you make the balloon at the same depth as the hill ridge there that is farthest back, you could probably get away with placing it horizontally just a little to the right of the middle between Tycho and Annarchy, and vertically about right where Annarchy's left hand is.
Anyway, that's just my .02 of course. The composition looks fantastic as it is.