mully-thread - easter card #2 - crits please!

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  • KalTorakKalTorak One way or another, they all end up in the Undercity.Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    I thought they were oranges - the FFucker is going after them, after all. He's not a nut-fucker.

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    they are oranges! ORANGES!

    i suppose that would be more apparent in the larger version

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    drugbunny1.png

    crits please!

    not finished but i would like to hear what you have to say as i work on it!

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    You shouuld make the lettering bigger than that.

    Also, plain gray countertop and blue background are boring as hell.

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Tam wrote: »
    You shouuld make the lettering bigger than that.

    Also, plain gray countertop and blue background are boring as hell.



    suggestions for countertop/bg?

    was thinking of going with some textures or something but iuno

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  • RankenphileRankenphile Passersby were amazed by the unusually large amounts of blood.Registered User, Moderator mod
    edited April 2009
    hahahahhahahahaha

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited April 2009
    marble texture would work well for counter. tiles for background, perhaps.

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  • KendeathwalkerKendeathwalker Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    He has a bra and panti clad female carrot tattoed on his arm..

    and hes snorting a carrot.


    He likes to fuck his blow?

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    mully wrote: »
    Tam wrote: »
    You shouuld make the lettering bigger than that.

    Also, plain gray countertop and blue background are boring as hell.



    suggestions for countertop/bg?

    was thinking of going with some textures or something but iuno

    yeah, texturing would take care of the countertop. A light grain ought to do. As for the background, some objects in desaturated hues ought to fix that. Some objects that say "drug lab" or "stoner den" rather than "nice suburban kitchen".

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Awesome Mully, I love it!

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Tam wrote: »
    mully wrote: »
    Tam wrote: »
    You shouuld make the lettering bigger than that.

    Also, plain gray countertop and blue background are boring as hell.



    suggestions for countertop/bg?

    was thinking of going with some textures or something but iuno

    yeah, texturing would take care of the countertop. A light grain ought to do. As for the background, some objects in desaturated hues ought to fix that. Some objects that say "drug lab" or "stoner den" rather than "nice suburban kitchen".

    i was actually going for suburban kitchen haha
    i always just think of the nice house in pulp fiction

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator mod
    edited April 2009
    Cutting board with chopped carrots/knife.

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    It also seems like it would read more clearly if the countertop didn't wrap around the bunnie, and just continued behind the blender.

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  • 2 Marcus 2 Ravens2 Marcus 2 Ravens Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    At first glance, I thought he was snorting it through celery. Which seems impossible, but appropriate, I guess. Either way, this is hilarious and awesome.

    I'm going to have to second earthwormadam about that counter, though.

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    mully wrote: »
    Tam wrote: »
    mully wrote: »
    Tam wrote: »
    You shouuld make the lettering bigger than that.

    Also, plain gray countertop and blue background are boring as hell.



    suggestions for countertop/bg?

    was thinking of going with some textures or something but iuno

    yeah, texturing would take care of the countertop. A light grain ought to do. As for the background, some objects in desaturated hues ought to fix that. Some objects that say "drug lab" or "stoner den" rather than "nice suburban kitchen".

    i was actually going for suburban kitchen haha
    i always just think of the nice house in pulp fiction

    oh ok

    that makes sense with the movie image in mind

    Tam on
  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    the tattoo is majestic

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator mod
    edited April 2009
    I keep thinking it's prox

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    ill post an update later, but i did the following:

    1) changed the tattoo to a sexy lady rabbit!
    2) added some carrot-tops (the thing not the person) on the counter
    3) made the counter go straight instead of being a corner
    4) added a marble texture
    5) changed the background to NEON PURPLE. i dont know, i like it
    6) made the font bigger and changed them both

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    attention: now is now later.

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    i've handed this out around my office a bit. good reactions.

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    YES

    awesome

    though, why did you shade the tattoo's leg?

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  • Andrew RyanAndrew Ryan Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    something about the angle of the tied back ears is bugging me.

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  • 2 Marcus 2 Ravens2 Marcus 2 Ravens Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    something about the angle of the tied back ears is bugging me.

    They definitely look like they're going to the side a bit, but you have to remember that he's a junkie rabbit, and that's to be expected.

    I think all the of the changes were for the better, but Tam has a good point with that leg shading.

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    i have no idea why i did that
    it looks a LOT lighter on my laptop ... doh

    will fix it before i post it anywhere else

    thanks!

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    mully you make me feel bad about myself

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Tam wrote: »
    mully you make me feel bad about myself

    likewise

    i like your stuff so much AND YOU NEVER FINISH ANYTHING

    IMAGINE WHAT'D HAPPEN IF YOU FINISHED SOMETHING?

    id probably implode.

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  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited April 2009
    mully i would also like to register my appreciation

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    thank you for registering with mullyco

    mully on
  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Yes, that looks mighty super!

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    mully wrote: »
    Tam wrote: »
    mully you make me feel bad about myself

    likewise

    i like your stuff so much AND YOU NEVER FINISH ANYTHING

    IMAGINE WHAT'D HAPPEN IF YOU FINISHED SOMETHING?

    id probably implode.

    I finish some things.

    Actually, that's exactly what I was talking about.

    Look at you.

    You started a thread for a WIP, took and considered all the advice, and got your shit done. In a timely manner, no less. You're industrious, mully. That's what you are. Industrious.

    While I fiddle around with things, throw a hissy fit and give up if things don't go just right.

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Tam wrote: »
    mully wrote: »
    Tam wrote: »
    mully you make me feel bad about myself

    likewise

    i like your stuff so much AND YOU NEVER FINISH ANYTHING

    IMAGINE WHAT'D HAPPEN IF YOU FINISHED SOMETHING?

    id probably implode.

    I finish some things.

    Actually, that's exactly what I was talking about.

    Look at you.

    You started a thread for a WIP, took and considered all the advice, and got your shit done. In a timely manner, no less. You're industrious, mully. That's what you are. Industrious.

    While I fiddle around with things, throw a hissy fit and give up if things don't go just right.

    i throw a hissy fit when things dont go right
    then i post it in the ac
    they tell me what i didnt do right
    i do what they say
    i repost
    and i move on!

    also i am going to PM you for a reason

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    advertisement i made for our company's intranet site

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    quick + dirty but im happy with the chalkboard look

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Easter Card #2.. (i am having fun with these terrible-lifestyles cards)

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    no where near finished, but i like to get feedback WHILE i'm working on it -- makes it easier for me to incorporate/consider it

    some questions:

    1) how many wine bottles would be too many wine bottles?
    2) i was thinking of making a 'distance' gradient and putting wine bottles trailing off into the distance -- too much?
    3) i was also thinking of doing the 'web 2.0' reflection, to make it look like he's on a shiny "kitchenesque" floor. thoughts?
    4) should the puke have chunks or would that be too much?
    5) the word "AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaugh" will be floating up from him -- should it go straight into the distance, or curling up .. or ... i dont know!!

    all help is greatly appreciated.

    OH. most importantly:

    i need a caption. the last one was, "hope your easter is dope!" want something similar.. the only ones i can think of are like, "happy easter, make sure it's not wasted!" or "today i'm drunk on easter spirit" or "chicken-dance your heart-out today!" (but i dont think it would work unless i made people in the back "nanananana"ing, which is what is giving him that pounding hangover headache)

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    drew this while i was awaiting responses (and lunch to end) but damn you none of you are saying anything. DOES THAT MEAN ITS ON THE ROAD TO PERFECTION? or does it mean you are being nice. has to be one of the two!

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    figuring i should do some sketches like this at lunches ... wondering if i can lure my friends to be models at my desk

    this took uhhhh 35 minutes, just because i havent painted anything in a long time and ... oh wait thats a lie. oh crap i never posted that! must find.

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    mully why have you not started on my drawing

    HUH

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Tam wrote: »
    mully why have you not started on my drawing

    HUH

    i am too busy drawing throwing up rabbits!

    also that will be a home thing! lunch-time-work-projects are speedpaints and drugrelated rabbits

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    RESPEK

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited April 2009
    Definitely tone down the backgrounds saturation, it's a bit distracting. And I think you could throw at least a couple more bottles in the foreground without it getting cluttered.

    As for the tagline, probably the one with drunk in it or maybe the wasted one. You need something simple like the last one that worked so well.

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  • TubeTube Administrator, ClubPA admin
    edited April 2009
    I don't think that background would be too bad once it's printed out. It's too bright on a screen though.

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