I've noticed how some of you guys help out with anatomy, so here you go. My problem is that I think this is mostly right. Yet, I know it needs some work, but I don't know where.
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edited July 2008
I'm no anatomy expert, but here's a few things I've picked up.
Most glaringly, her right shoulder is non-existent, the right arm connects directly to the neck.
Her upper right arm appears longer than the left, even taking into consideration foreshortening.
The hips are unnaturally small in comparison to the rest of the body and the left leg has an unusual curve in it.
a couple of unfinished pieces that just don't seem to be working...
What are you trying to do in the pieces that isn't working for you? To me, they look pretty neat. But, again, I'm not quite sure what you intended to accomplish.
Especially ones of the bondage fetish variety. Smooth.
Anywho, I dont feel like making a new thread yet, but I -finally- got around to actually working on the finals for Phoenix Epoch. I fucking rewrote the thing like 4 times, did an entire other set of roughs, did 2 finished pages of that, rewrote it AGAIN and now I'm finally happy with the direction its going. Mainly because I completely took out all the dialogue.
You seem to be teetering on the edge of a point with this one, where It looks like you could go into the next level of information and detail. Everything is just a little too unfinished looking.
The difference between your drawing and rendering skills are apparent in that one AoB.
Could you be specific enough with your criticism that I can actually do something about it please?
Yeah, sorry. The deltoid to elbow region of his left (our right) arm thins out too much, and I don't think the bicep would be one smooth curve like that, the trapezius is also too small. Also, his legs seem too thin to support his massive torso well.
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Most glaringly, her right shoulder is non-existent, the right arm connects directly to the neck.
Her upper right arm appears longer than the left, even taking into consideration foreshortening.
The hips are unnaturally small in comparison to the rest of the body and the left leg has an unusual curve in it.
Because robots fish with thier faces.
Buckle up!
What are you trying to do in the pieces that isn't working for you? To me, they look pretty neat. But, again, I'm not quite sure what you intended to accomplish.
http://www.bustkaratedojo.net/ravenshadow/evenmorenew/MetalQueenSmall.jpg
Anywho, I dont feel like making a new thread yet, but I -finally- got around to actually working on the finals for Phoenix Epoch. I fucking rewrote the thing like 4 times, did an entire other set of roughs, did 2 finished pages of that, rewrote it AGAIN and now I'm finally happy with the direction its going. Mainly because I completely took out all the dialogue.
Here's Page 1
Here's the model I made for his funky snow-car (model in 3dsm, render in sketchup)
http://mcgibs.iseenothing.com/junk/phoenix/snow-car-render1.jpg
And here's some concepts for the Phoenix Dawn cultists that will be showing up later on in the issue, with thier poison gas and giant nukes.
It's such a great idea.
A study of canine proportions for tonight.
Redraw of an old design.
Our first game is now available for free on Google Play: Frontier: Isle of the Seven Gods
I liked it but got stuck with the wings and gave up on it.
Buckle up!
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my roommate brought back a wacom from school (first time ever), and i'm messing around with it and wanted to put two doodles i did.
So, yeah, more naked bodies. Spoiler-ed for size.
Haha
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In any case, [echo Campion].
Mykonos, you be gettin' better, sir.
Also, thanks muchly for the compliment, but I'm nowhere near that level.
Could you be specific enough with your criticism that I can actually do something about it please?
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You seem to be teetering on the edge of a point with this one, where It looks like you could go into the next level of information and detail. Everything is just a little too unfinished looking.
Yeah, sorry. The deltoid to elbow region of his left (our right) arm thins out too much, and I don't think the bicep would be one smooth curve like that, the trapezius is also too small. Also, his legs seem too thin to support his massive torso well.
Edit: oh hey, lookit me being at the top of the page here.
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pt 4 on its way
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I don't even know.
I made this while everyone else in the iscribble room was afk.
its simple...