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Yo... opinions, criticisms, comments?? Spanx... Yes I did start a new account thread with devious intentions that I never followed through on lol... here's a link to the original on Penny Arcade: http://forums.penny-arcade.com/showthread.php?t=109192
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I like the last panel, the most dynamic of the 4; 1 and 2 feel really rigid by comparison, 2 in particular because it's just a dead profile of the kid moving up a perfect 45 degree incline.
I think the whimsical feel of this would be better served with lighter, more washed-out colors (the mauve-y gutters aren't working for me) and with better treatment of your lineart. It's really dark and heavy, which can work, but you've muddied it a little where your highlights have been daubed on sort of over the top of it (as in the hat in panel 1).
Also your lettering isn't working for me, either. Hand-lettering would work really nicely with this. Barring that, something a little more readable, yeah.
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Why start a new account and a new thread?
To fool the unobservant [me].