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first non-computer artwork of mine

toddleabootoddleaboo Registered User regular
edited June 2010 in Artist's Corner
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    earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited June 2010
    Not bad, though certain problem areas certainly need work.

    Composition wise, the bottom is empty and the top is squished to fit within the boundaries of the page. Plan these things out ahead of time. If you want to draw humanoid figures, your just going to have to continue to study anatomy because these ones are kinda funky. The figure on the left doesn't suffer as much because it has no legs, and the arms have no muscle structure. The two on the right have odd muscle and proportion problems not to mention weird feet/hands, and very stiff/awkward poses.

    You've got a nice clean style, with some nice colors too so keep studying the form and you'll see improvement. I'd stick to traditional for awhile because this is already miles better than what you were doing with a computer, from what I saw.

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    Faded_SneakersFaded_Sneakers City of AngelsRegistered User regular
    edited June 2010
    While there are anatomy issues certainly, this is a lot better then your oval comics. If your comics were drawn like this Id be much more likely to read them.

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    PierceNeckPierceNeck Registered User regular
    edited June 2010
    Just curious, but why don't you just have one thread instead of making another one every time you have something new?

    Also, I'm going to echo the aged sneakers and Adam of the Oligochaeta clan. This is much better than your than your previous stuff.

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    toddleabootoddleaboo Registered User regular
    edited June 2010
    Here's one I finished today...

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    tynictynic PICNIC BADASS Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2010
    For a second I thought you were actually going to respond to crits. Guess not.


    At least it has relatively few ovals.

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    toddleabootoddleaboo Registered User regular
    edited June 2010
    tynic wrote: »
    For a second I thought you were actually going to respond to crits. Guess not.


    At least it has relatively few ovals.

    No, I agree with what they're saying. Just soaking it all in.

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    Shiekahn_boyShiekahn_boy Registered User regular
    edited June 2010
    I would like to see some real life sketches to see where you are at. Anything really. Fruit, bird, cats persons.

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    jasikajohnsonjasikajohnson Registered User new member
    edited June 2010
    Your non-computer artwork really a nice,creation was a good,this is really a nice stuff,I think you do some changes in your drawing,draw proper legs,arms this changes you do then looks a better,but also looks nice.

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