New Webcomic - Advice and crits?

Langly

i totally just crit this webcomic

Fuga

hahaha is this for realsies

Taskman

I genuinely hope not. I'd prefer to think of it as an elaborate, failed trolling than someone actually thinking that those comics are remotely presentable.
Impressed this threads' gotten to twenty pages, though.

jippee

I have this horrible feeling that this was one of Tube's tests, and everyone who posted has failed it.

Nice artwork though!

Tommy2Hands

this thread this the fucking best

I love you guys so much

Artreus

We weren't even that mean aside from one or two people being dicks.

Lots of people provided honest criticism.

KalTorak

There just wasn't that much there to critique. It was like slapping a rock on the table an going "Hey, here's my sculpture of a dog. What do you think? Where are some places I could improve it?" Well, start with a basic dog-shape and then get back to me.

Tommy2Hands

Too bad advice that was nicely given out was ignored by xxbox here in favor of talking about how many commissions she's gotten you guys omg

Also, this is pretty clear trolling, though I kinda want to believe otherwise

Fuga

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Girl_gamer
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_gamer

mensch-o-matic

Fuga wrote: »

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Girl_gamer
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_gamer

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_Girl_gamer

(its just a pic of me poopin)

Projeck

Mensch will you stop pooping for just a minute

mensch-o-matic

i gotta keep poopin or ill stop breathing and die

i am a poop shark

Macro9

Hunter wrote: »

Mysst wrote: »

Vivixenne wrote: »

The iPad keeps autocorrecting vaginae to vagina

I had to trick to get it to work that time

it also corrects Netflix to Negroid

Damn racist iPads

iPaddies

Centipede Damascus

no way that is real

it is way too adorable to exist

Ubik

Now that's a webcomic

Avraham

Tommy2Hands wrote: »

Also, this is pretty clear trolling, though I kinda want to believe otherwise

You have nothing to lose by giving the OP the benefit of the doubt

jippee

Avraham wrote: »

Tommy2Hands wrote: »

Also, this is pretty clear trolling, though I kinda want to believe otherwise

You have nothing to lose by giving the OP the benefit of the doubt

I SO want to believe

PiptheFair

Koshian wrote: »

manlishiba

shiba angrinu

mensch-o-matic

why are you guys doubting the depths of a 14 year old's stupidity

jippee

mensch-o-matic wrote: »

why are you guys doubting the depths of a 14 year old's stupidity

because it's too good to be true.

just looking at it panel for panel tells you this has to be deliberate.

MKR

I went through some of the OP's posts.

If getting paid for commission work and being published is the criteria for being good, I'm a wizard.

I made $75 on three plain text pages for a book's website. Just because I tested it in three different browsers didn't make me professional or even good.

mensch-o-matic

when im good im very good but when im bad im better

TheySlashThem

Mr Fuzzbutt wrote: »

Hey so I really like your webcomic!

I liked it enough that I even made a guest strip! You can even put it on your web page if you like.

fuzzbutt have I ever told you that you are a cool dude

The Lovely Bastard

want that dog koshian

gimme that dog

jippee

MKR wrote: »

I went through some of the OP's posts.

If getting paid for commission work and being published is the criteria for being good, I'm a goddamn wizard.

I made $75 on three plain text pages for a book's website. Just because I tested it in three different browsers didn't make me professional or even good.

well in that vein:
I wasn't about to mention it, but hey, nowadays even your employers know what ANTIALIAS means.

Melding

damn it, i had this thread disarmed and ready to be shipped out. look at what you have all done!

Don't make me do something we will all regret.

like this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MX0D4oZwCsA

mensch-o-matic

your parents, however, still can be tricked into using ctrl+f4

MKR

Do people still say rasterbate?

mensch-o-matic

I PUT AUTOTUNE ON REGULAR TALK THAT MAKES ME A MUSICIAN AND MEME SENSATION

*top itunes download of the month*

Centipede Damascus

double rainbow song is awesome

don't be a busta

jippee

Melding wrote: »

damn it, i had this thread disarmed and ready to be shipped out. look at what you have all done!

Don't make me do something we will all regret.

like this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MX0D4oZwCsA

this song just replaced cee-lo in my head

Melding

Trust me, in a few hours you will regret me linking that. because you will still be listening to it.

jippee

Melding wrote: »

damn it, i had this thread disarmed and ready to be shipped out. look at what you have all done!

Don't make me do something we will all regret.

like this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MX0D4oZwCsA

this song just replaced cee-lo in my head

Oh no.
now it's mixing
fuck you
and your double rainbow too

Melding

IT BEGINS!

jippee

please make it end!

mensch-o-matic

barf

jippee

that'll do it.

Muse Among Men

mensch-o-matic wrote: »

Ninjabear wrote: »

Anybody here read the newest "Girly" comic? It's really.............interesting.

what the fuck did i even just

Ahahaha

The dude's a really good artist, I'mma give him that.

Tommy2Hands

Avraham wrote: »

Tommy2Hands wrote: »

Also, this is pretty clear trolling, though I kinda want to believe otherwise

You have nothing to lose by giving the OP the benefit of the doubt

I guess

Tommy2Hands

Muse Among Men wrote: »

mensch-o-matic wrote: »

Ninjabear wrote: »

Anybody here read the newest "Girly" comic? It's really.............interesting.

what the fuck did i even just

Ahahaha

The dude's a really good artist, I'mma give him that.

ahahahaha

best use of the power of love yet