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UNiCOMICS

Hello I am UNiCOMICS I live in the UK I love comics and I love to draw them too
heres some of my Art work which I hope you enjoy too AND any Crits would be awesome.

heres some of my comic work

my web comic thonk!
this artist block one is the latest






the thonk! comic is up at 52 pages now and I just did a Livestream event where I did 24 pages within 19 hours in celebration of passing the 50th page.

a killzone comic page


a dead space comic


Some other art such as fake film screen caps that normally take me roughly a day to do or less.

Singularity (not the game)


Fake Film: Euphoria (character from the above picture is in this)


Fake Film: Terminator: Incursion


some random pictures I have done.







I'll update more later.

ninjai

Good stuff mate. Love the "feux" storyboarding. Your effects are really great, but it seems like you struggle in some areas with facial structure (I.E. dead space, bottom center terminator picture.)

I love the random pictures at the bottom, especially, red riding hood?

btdubs, I want to watch both of those movies... :C You really get a sense of character, tension, climax, and satisfaction with the storyboards.... Really great man, can't wait to see moar!

UNiCOMICS

ninjai wrote: »

Good stuff mate. Love the "feux" storyboarding. Your effects are really great, but it seems like you struggle in some areas with facial structure (I.E. dead space, bottom center terminator picture.)

I love the random pictures at the bottom, especially, red riding hood?

btdubs, I want to watch both of those movies... :C You really get a sense of character, tension, climax, and satisfaction with the storyboards.... Really great man, can't wait to see moar!

Thank you I have many more fake film things most of them where just dreams I had. The Terminator one is a film not about John conner at all its just a guy who is hunted down for what ever reason and meets two rouge terminators and such, and they try and survive together. the

the Euphoria is the latest one I have done out of the fake films I have done.

Heres another fake film called Noir and its a old one.


and another old one called Emit

ninjai

O man. The mood, the composition, the progression in those scenes.

Theres so much emotion and movement in those! I just keep re"watching" them over and over :P

I'd love to see these fully illustrated!

UNiCOMICS

ninjai wrote: »

O man. The mood, the composition, the progression in those scenes.

Theres so much emotion and movement in those! I just keep re"watching" them over and over :P

I'd love to see these fully illustrated!

someone said to me to do them as proper comics or something.
heres some more fake films this time a trilogy
UNITY 1


UNITY2


UNITY3


heres some Doctor who doodles.
this one was done this year


this one was done a couple of years ago

MKR

I like your style. It has the feel of cyberpunk without being so dark and depressing.

UNiCOMICS

MKR wrote: »

I like your style. It has the feel of cyberpunk without being so dark and depressing.

think your the first person to say it looked cyberpunky haha

anyways heres a picture of a random character called Point-Blank

Iruka

Theres alot of pictures in here! Im not sure what order things are in, so its sorta hard to critique things, Overall though, when your lines get scratchy they can be a bit distracting, and the line weights arent awful but they seem sort of random. You could probably get some polish if you spent just a little more time smoothing them out.

Welcome to the forum and stuff, I hope you stick around. I enjoy your color choices in the story boards, they establish the mood pretty quick.

UNiCOMICS

Iruka wrote: »

Theres alot of pictures in here! Im not sure what order things are in, so its sorta hard to critique things, Overall though, when your lines get scratchy they can be a bit distracting, and the line weights arent awful but they seem sort of random. You could probably get some polish if you spent just a little more time smoothing them out.

Welcome to the forum and stuff, I hope you stick around. I enjoy your color choices in the story boards, they establish the mood pretty quick.

Yeah I know my lines needs more work but It could be the fact that it doesn't take me that long to draw (most of my fake films take me roughly a day to do) most of this stuff but the Singularity was the only thing that I did proper lines for but I think its helped helped me with my lines in my later work for example, Euphoria and point-blank.

and thank you I hope I make a lot of friends here. I am thinking of setting up a forum comic where the characters are the members themselves set in random stories and stuff I have done it before twice and it was fun. so maybe I could do one here too.

ninjai

Some of your clothing looks awkward. like the left side point blanks jacket around the waiste doesn't quite flow around him the way you'd think it ought to, and the length of fabric on the right side (audience) makes it seem rather non isometric.

As well as the jacket sleeves on both point blank and Dr Who. They have way excess material draping around the elbows/triceps.(it looks less like a natural wrinkle/bend, and more like a bad seamstress making her first jacket) You may want to look at some references for bends and wrinkles in clothing rather than drawing the "symbol" (as they say) for it.

And I'd say yeah, a little cyberpunky :P

UNiCOMICS

ninjai wrote: »

Some of your clothing looks awkward. like the left side point blanks jacket around the waiste doesn't quite flow around him the way you'd think it ought to, and the length of fabric on the right side (audience) makes it seem rather non isometric.

As well as the jacket sleeves on both point blank and Dr Who. They have way excess material draping around the elbows/triceps.(it looks less like a natural wrinkle/bend, and more like a bad seamstress making her first jacket) You may want to look at some references for bends and wrinkles in clothing rather than drawing the "symbol" (as they say) for it.

And I'd say yeah, a little cyberpunky :P

this is helpful thank you heres a little Page from my Webcomic and a fake screen shot thingy that was done in sai and photoshop

this is a new page

UNiCOMICS

slow uploading of the post so i have deleted and moved to a new thread

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