I have started a webcomic (NSFW)

Tube

Behold it for it is best

Garlic Bread

It's got potential.

Epi

You know what would REALLY make this comic a billion trillion times better?

if you did it in 3D!!!!!!11!!1!1!!!!

bombardier

Can I have permission to print this in my college newspaper

PotU

You should work on the anatomy.

Garlic Bread

I think you should use comic sans ms for the font

Tube

Epi wrote: »

You know what would REALLY make this comic a billion trillion times better?

if you did it in 3D!!!!!!11!!1!1!!!!

You will need to use your 3D glasses

Tube

although this does leave the problem of how to render the all important second panel in full 3D without somewhat stepping on the joke

PotU

Keith wrote: »

I think you should use comic sans ms for the font

Never use comic sans in comics!

Also, I like the facial expressions.

Epi

Cardboard Tube wrote: »

Epi wrote: »

You know what would REALLY make this comic a billion trillion times better?

if you did it in 3D!!!!!!11!!1!1!!!!

You will need to use your 3D glasses

I totally have a pair!

It's like he's eating that invisible lettuce right out of my own mouth!

bombardier

Cardboard Tube wrote: »

Epi wrote: »

You know what would REALLY make this comic a billion trillion times better?

if you did it in 3D!!!!!!11!!1!1!!!!

You will need to use your 3D glasses

PotU

Cardboard Tube wrote: »

although this does leave the problem of how to render the all important second panel in full 3D without somewhat stepping on the joke

It's invisible anyway.

Stupid Mr Whoopsie Name

I'm so tired of these Penny Arcade rip off comics.

Epi

By the way, I fully support the necessity of the NSFW tag for the mature themes suggested through this comic (If something this profound could be considered a comic)

MagicToaster

Brilliant!

Orikaeshigitae

Here's a hint, Fuckstick. Learn some fucking anatomy.

Stupid Mr Whoopsie Name

Make sure you put a "Donate" button on your site when you put this comic on the web!

Tube

So I've been working with some more political material, this comic involved a lot of research. I'm also coming up against a lot of technical issues. For instance, my tab key has stopped working, and I have to just press space a bunch. Maybe a tablet would help? Note the reflection of the light source on bono's glasses. That is a little trick I learned from the great masters.

Epi

Controversial!

Edit: I think the next big step for you would be to work on varying camera angles. Maybe get a shot from behind Bono's head talking to his drooling fans or perhaps one of his ear

Prof. Awesome

Attaching images all up ins

PotU

Dude, too soon!

Brolo

Cardboard Tube wrote:

Maybe a tablet would help?

you need a wacom cintiq in order to make real art

also your comic is okay but it would be better if you used sprites using this template but made them into DBZ sprites and made this into a DBZ gamers comic where goku fights halo

also your main character needs bigger breasts those ones arent realistic at all

Epi

Goku vs. Harry Potter might provide more dynamic character conflict and development with regards to coming of age rights and good vs evil

Tube

Here are some more comics! I have been experimenting with the use of the spray tool to create gingers! I have really been branching out with this comic. For instance, I used both the right and left click colour options (that's color for you Americans!) which caused the background of the text box to turn ginger! what a pickle! At the bottom is the picture of Sam that I worked from (Sam is what everyone used to call him before he was a succesful pretentious bastard and then a succesful pretentious bastard with a slightly shorter name who owes me a fucking fiver come to think of it)

bombardier

Epi wrote: »

Goku vs. Harry Potter might provide more dynamic character conflict and development with regards to coming of age rights and good vs evil

Guys lets keep this on topic ok

I think the sprite suggestion would do wonders for your career

PotU

Yeah, I'm not happy with the beard in the second panel.

Tube

can you be more specific in your criticism please

PotU

It's the juxtapose.

Brolo

i am enjoying the continuity that you have so far and the punchlines are great however some of the comics focus too much on humor and not enough on action

you should have a comic where your characters have sex i think it would add to the appeal of the comic for the average internet audience

PotU

Yeah, some character development there and bam!

bombardier

You should make a comic about halo 3 and maybe some other video games ok.

Tube

I threw in a penny arcade reference! I know a lot of you guys are fans!

PotU

Oh, that one's an insider.

Brolo

you should turn your comic into a trilogy

like it will be three comics that you read at three separate sites and then each one has a countdown before the comic starts also if you want to maek it as a full time webcomicist you need to get merchandise and t-shirts you can sell

have you heard of cafepress.com?

also you should put some java banner ads on your site and you should also make a site for your comic

Tube

Based on real life future events!

Brolo

tube your updates are getting more and more sporadic if you don't start listening to your fanbase and make your comics posted on time i will have to take my business elsewhere

honestly man you don't want to mess with me i have a lot of influence on the internet and i can make or break a webcomic

Tube

sorry dude I was making toast

PotU

You should start to put some anime references in there. Maybe popular ones like Naruto or Dragonball Z.

Killjoy

Cardboard Tube wrote: »

Based on real life future events!

Listen to me I am like 3% of your fanbase!

Prof. Awesome

Tube, you need to add a male character who turns into a girl.

Just think of the donations

Fuzzy Cumulonimbus Cloud

Hi, I would just like to tell Cardboard Tube that the new shirts are totally not showing up on the website yet.
Please tell him this.
Thanks.