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Need some advice

Inter_dInter_d Registered User regular
edited November 2007 in Artist's Corner
hey, guys I need some help finishing a piece and i figured i'd come here since...well, deviantart isn't really chockful of people who give out critiques or helpful advice.

anyway, here is this rough character outline that i'm making and frankly it just looks wrong to me but i'm at a loss as to how to correct it.

Heidrichpreview.jpg?t=1194810952

the character is supposed to be a top a tower amongst a burning landscape but i'm not too attached to it so i might change it to make something a bit easier to put as a background.

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  • EpiEpi Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    The direction of her torso doesn't mesh with her legs.Try and place your legs like hers and then lean towards the strait leg like she is. It's kind of uncomfy

    And her boobies look too.... high up? stiff?
    They look off

    Yeah, and if she's on a tower you might want to pull the perspective back in order to capture the idea that she's way up there.

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  • The One Dark KnightThe One Dark Knight Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    STEER AWAY FROM ANIME

    Also, dead center focus is a no no.

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  • ZeeBeeKayZeeBeeKay Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    her breasts are way too high. There's more than a hand's length between the bottom of (my) chin and the start of any breast tissue. Also, normal boobs don't act that way unless they're encased in plastic or something that makes them gravity-defying.

    On second thought, it may just be that her head's too large. I can't tell.

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  • Inter_dInter_d Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    Alrighty! death to dead center, fix the chest, the alignment of the torso and legs and pan back so the viewer gets the impression that she is in fact on a huge tower. though to be honest, i might just change the damn pose. I'm getting too frustrated with the current one.

    I'll get cracking on it and get back here when i've made some headway.

    Inter_d on
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