So here's the first 8 pages to a comic I've been working on. Before I add colour I want to perfect the dialogue and fix any mistakes with the art. So if anyone sees any glaring weak points please point em out to me! I'm posting these here cause I know you folk don't hold back. lol
Keep in mind I don't want to scrap the whole thing and redraw every page either, I just want to make these pages the best they can be before proceeding.
Any feedback at all is much appreciated and I'll be eternally grateful for anything ;) .