Buddy&Spirrot Page 6

carmofin

I figured its time to sit down and get productive again. Fitting the time of the year i wanted to make a winter-page and fitting my current mood not a very happy one at that. still too lazy to get a proper headline though.




and as always, heres the links to the previous ones.

http://entenhausen.at/~carmofin/buddyspirrot1web.jpg
http://entenhausen.at/~carmofin/buddyspirrot2web.jpg
http://entenhausen.at/~carmofin/buddyspirrot3web.jpg
http://entenhausen.at/~carmofin/buddyspirrot4web.jpg
http://entenhausen.at/~carmofin/buddyspirrot5web.jpg

Talleyrand

Pretty abstract and definently something I would buy and hang up on my wall.

Staleghoti

oh my god those are awesome. These are the kinds of things I would read every week.

Like... they're all really nice stories.

(ohms)Crunchy

You can't really read them, since you know, they have no words.

But yeah, they are very nice. I like the overall look of them.

trixtah

this reminds me a lot of Grim Fandango...I love it

ksblair

I think the style and panel set up is done well, but I seem a little bored with the "story" of them, maybe I am just stupid and not getting some form of irony or wit, but I am just not seeing it at the moment.

Godfather

I have always liked these comics, but i'm still confused as to where they're trying to get to at the end. I reviewed over the first comic, and it seems like they're trying to get to a semi-vegas locale?

Just be interesting to know where the pair is headed is all.

Greatnation

I think i would like them alot more if there wasn't soooo much going on with the panel boders and the space between and around the panels. It feels like your expirmenting, which is good, but I dont think the expierment has a purpose. Why do the stuff on the outside? Cuz it looks cool? Right now it is distracting.

Prospicience

what a great friend

laughterkillsme

Hell with Prospicience, I think the borders and space are fine. I'm not sure why its called isolation and not something like friendship though?

I love these things, keep making more ... if ya put em on nice posters i'd so buy them!

Prospicience

laughterkillsme wrote:

Hell with Prospicience, I think the borders and space are fine. I'm not sure why its called isolation and not something like friendship though?

I love these things, keep making more ... if ya put em on nice posters i'd so buy them!

did you mean greatnation? Oh and I thought it was called isolation because the bird is all cozy, while skelly man is practically taking the trek through the cold by himself.

carmofin

Greatnation wrote:

I think i would like them alot more if there wasn't soooo much going on with the panel boders and the space between and around the panels. It feels like your expirmenting, which is good, but I dont think the expierment has a purpose. Why do the stuff on the outside? Cuz it looks cool? Right now it is distracting.

hm, well its not there for no reason usually, on most pages i try to include the border-pciture into the story, but in the newest one, i guess its jsut there for the heck of it... I guess everything is really quite confusing, but i have noticed one thing, the more pages i make, the easier it gets for people to read it.
i think tis just a matter of getting across what i want to do, it was pretty frustrating when after the first two pages noone seemed to get a thing, but by now its getting better. thats kind of motivating, i think i can start to do some of my favorite pages now
I cant wait for the time when ill have finished all these pages and can look at them as one whole thing. although, i will have to change the order of them drastically, so its not all that confusing.