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Zombie Attack Pencil Sketch

Crazy ArtistCrazy Artist Registered User regular
edited December 2007 in Artist's Corner
Did this the other day, just wanted some critiques on it. Just tell me what I could have done better. Thanks in advance.

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    MossMoss Registered User regular
    edited December 2007
    Not an awful start, but you should try drawing from life and studying perspective. Try tidying up your lines as well, they're a little scratchy.

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    ObilexObilex Registered User regular
    edited December 2007
    You should pay more attention to the light sources on your clouds, right now they are just blobs of shade.

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    HallucinogenHallucinogen Registered User regular
    edited December 2007
    If you fix or remove the perspective for the zombie on the ground, you have a very peculiar but interesting perspective overall. But I think the sketch needs more finish before a more constructive critique can be offered.

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    Wonder BreadWonder Bread Registered User regular
    edited December 2007
    The zombie lying by his feet looks very weird. It's too small, and his legs look like they are in a unnatural position. Also, The stance that the gunner is in looks quite awkward, and the zombie on the bottom right doesn't look like he's just been shot. His head would snap back. Try to clean up your lines as well.

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