Bog dumps more

TheBog

I REFUSE TO DIE!





I guess from now on I'm gonna dump everything I do into here. What do you people call these things?.. Dumps? OLOL
I found this doodle yesterday so I finished it and inked it.

And here's some fat f*%k of a mutant I did yesterday in class.


Um.. I went and photocopied my 10x15 version and shrunk it down and then scanned that. Anyway, here you go. This is the new page 1 uncolored. I'd like to color it tonight.


So a little while ago I decided to do a comic. It was for this little independent group that prints short comics in their little compilations. They're good people. Anyway, I decided I'd do a comic for them, but when I was around page 6 or 7 I received an email with all the precise measurements and proportions and junk and my pages weren't proportional at all to what the final product should be. Aparently your standard 8.5x11 is fatter than a standard comic page. So now I started redrawing this badboy. Originally I wasn't going to show this to you guys until I got to around page 10 at least, but seeing as how now I'm redrawing it that'll be in FOREVER. Enjoy this old version in the meanwhile. I'm making the new one lots nicer. (more room to work on these huge comic page things... lol HEUG LEIK XBOXLOL)

Also I'm gonna post some crap that I haven't posted because I wanted to save it for a dump of sorts. I guess this would be it.

Any comments or crits are welcome, especially on the comic!












Oh, and I don't remember if I ever posted this guy. It's kind of old, but here you go anyway.

Spectre-x

Rad stuf, all of it. I like the way you can exaggerate gestures and poses, and how you do faces.

DeeLock

last page, 4th panel

"You've lost. Get your carcass OFF this worthless Russian land."

earthwormadam

Pretty cool comics, they have a nice flow to them. I breezed through them. If you are reworking these old ones, than I'd really like to see the final versions...

Also I am amazed by your character designs. The first one is the one that grabbed my attention. They are really good, and you must have improved considerably lately because that is some high caliber stuff. Good anatomy and muscle structure!

StealthNachos

What the heck? That Dark Eldar, Ogryn, Warlock, and the Space Marine (wich needs a lot of work on the face by the way) sorta came outta left field. None the less, I like them and the comic pretty good here. It sorta reminds me of Spex's stuff (probably because I just looked at a post of his). There's some things that need to be worked on but the good definetly out wieghs the bad here.

TheBog

Well thank you. Yes Dark Eldar (+10) Not Ogryn but some random mutant (-5) Shugenja, not Warlock (-5) and not Space Marine (ugh... ) but Ursarkar Creed (-15). And lots of work on the face? I thought I did the face quite well. But I am here to take criticism and I'd love to hear how I could improve (especially my comic).

TheBog

Bump?

Mayday

Hokay, for starters: on the last pic, the lines that indicate wrinkles around the mouth have the same weight as the edgelines of the nose. I think they should be lighter.

On that Eldar pic: he's not really holding the gun in his right hand, it looks like it's glued to it.

Generally, the linework is very good do, much to my taste. The only problem I see in the comic is that some of the faces look rather flat.

TheBog

Thanks, sir. I agree.

JCM

I love simple linework without fancy inking, love to see those in colours man!

TheBog

Here's a taste.

JCM

May I suggest just a slight sepia tone?

Other than that I dont mind the flat colours/faces, too many comics nowadays are overcoloured/inked to death (have you seen Xmen these days? ugh), and the colours with simple 1-level shades are good the way they are.

TheBog

I thought about sepia-ing it, but I don't yet know if the thing's gonna be printed in color or not. It can always be fixed later on if it does allow for sepia. And thanks.

JCM

Theres ACDsee, its a image viewing program which allows you to reduce sizes (I use it to shrink my comic without loosing quality) and theres a quick sepia filter, if you wish to check it out.

TheBog

That sounds pretty cool. Link it here and I'll check it out once I come back home.

Malesherbez

I like your comic a lot, is it sort of a Chechnya thing going on? I like the simple style, but sometimes it seems too simple, especially with their armored truck. I had some trouble telling the characters apart, but maybe I just need more pages of them.

TheBog

I think... yeah.. yeah, I just arted.